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Reviewer: Jessie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thank you for not being fully evil! Awesome chapter. Another fan of houses rather than apartments here :-)
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thank you for letting us know that Jasper will be ok....Great chapter, can't wait for the next one... ;D
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Am glad both Jasper and Edward are doing good, I felt so sorry for Alice.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
wow! Poor Jasper - I see some problems at work developing. Glad to see Edward got his dream job.
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Poor Alice! And do I suspect some foul play coming from James? I do hope Bella has a job to return to when she gets back to Seattle!
Great chapter hon!
Reviewer: Gem-dawg (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
omg sooo wasnt expecting that lol..good job in maken me cry lol xxx ^_^
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Well, it's good that you're only half-evil...however, I'm still kind of waiting for the other shoe to drop. Of course, this could just be my own nature waying in.
Thanks for the update-Kate
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I was actually just going to point out how un-evil you were when I read the Chapter End Notes, lol...yes, you could have been a LOT eviler (is that a word?), hehe....
Surfing is damn dangerous! I took a board to the head a week and a half ago down in Nicaragua and needed six stitches right above my right eyebrow...and that was *without* crazy currents and riptides. I'm so happy both Jasper and Edward will be okay (...ahem...they WILL, won't they?!). Poor Bella and Esme and Carlisle and *especially* Alice....
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I am so grateful you're only HALF-evil! Heh!
James makes me nervous! I'm not sure Bella should trust him as a mediary between her and Bruce. I don't think he's reliable to pass the message onto Bruce. I fear she's going to get fired??
Thanks for the update. I'm eager for more.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Hey WndrngY,
I soooooo loved this chapter. A lot of suspense, romance and generally well written. Great job on it. Looking forward to the next chapter and Edward's move.
Sarah
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I knew everything was going a bit too perfectly! I hope Jasper recovers completely. Great story!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Hooray for Edward moving to Seattle. I am really wondering what James is up to! I was holding my breath through the entire last part I think. Thanks for downsizing the cliffy!!!!
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Oh, poor Jasper! I'm so glad you didn't make him die!!
Reviewer: Twinklefae (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Wow! That was still pretty evil. Poor Alice. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I knew some shit was about to happen! All was way too perfect and we have read enough fanfic to know this is a bad sign when it happens in the middle of a story.
Now, I have a really bad feelong about the fact that it was James who answered the call... That fucker is up to something and it is surely not good!
Thx for th chapter, hon!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Lovely chapter!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Great chapter! cannot wait for the next one.
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thank you for your half-evilness.
The chapter was fun up until that nasty ol' riptide mad. I think we are all sure James is about to stab Bella in the back, but I hope whatever he does backfires on him.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Man that James is up to something I just know it ! I'm so glad the boys are going to be okay it seems.
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
great story
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I started out this chapter fully focused on James-hating and then you dropped the bomb. I got all goosbumpy and teary when Esme called in the club. I feel absolutely horrible for Alice. I couldn't choose between any of the group for this to happen to, but it's just awful that it's Jasper! And you are so not evil! *crosses fingers* Let everything turn out okay! This is just terrible! *begs on bended knee* Good news next chapter...? Posting soon...? Don't make us suffer...? *blows kisses* Luv ya.
Reviewer: suyapa (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
i like the ending of this chapter its really cute i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
oh wow I didn't see it coming that Jazz and Edward would be hurt while surfing! I look forward to seeing where ya go with things! Update again soon!
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
ugh i almost had a hear attack literally, when Edward said they were going surfing i just KNEW something bad was going to happen. james is a sneaky fucker too, i bet he's trying to steal B's job grrrr.....
Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
oh my god i didn't see that coming!!
and whats up with Bruce?! HRMMM..
loving this story!
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