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Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
wow.. i havent been able to stop reading. Iam just like her.. independent bitch.. I need a southern gentelmam in my life!! AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
No...meeting Christy for coffee (while innocent) is not a good idea when in a committed relationship. I keep thinking that Bella is going to be making a surprise visit...yikes. Such a good story and Edward can never say "sugar" enough! He gets me everytime! I have to read the line at least twice.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
What! I was so not expecting that to happen-but I'm *guessing* that James is going to take evil advantage of Bella's reaction to the accident. Can't wait to see Edward wake up!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Wow! I am just catching up and need to flip to next immediately to see what is happening now!
Reviewer: JustThatChick (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
i just spent two hours reading these 18 chapters, and they're amazing. i love it. [=
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
awww... good then bad. i hope everything turns out well
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Shocker!!! I knew things couldn't go that well for too long. Please don't leave us hanging.
These three things I know are true.
-First, Bella and Edward are finally peacefully in love.
-Second, they are going to make it work no matter what.
-Third, James is back in Seattle and is up to something durty!
-TheHarper
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I'm soooo glad that you aren't truly evil. That would have broken my heart.
I'm assuming that James is taking pleasure in getting Bella's responsibilties. She'll probably be fired soon. Yes? No?
Reviewer: avalon321 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
nice chapter. I'm thinking James isn't going to relay the message to Bruce and Bella's going to be looking for a new job.
Reviewer: MasonsMommy (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I SOOOOO was ready to cry! I thought Jasper was gonna die! Please don't! Don't break Alice's heart that way! Thanks for such a great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
OMG! Please let everyone make it through this, and I don't trust James one bit!
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
thank god Jasper is ok....that woulda sucked.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
THANK YOU for not leaving us a dying-Jasper cliffie!! that would have been just too much!
I KNOW, deep in my heart, that James is about to fuck Bella over. I bet he doesn't tell Chef that she called. Prick!! Ah well - maybe she's destined to open her own place. Hmm, and maybe Jasper will be too scared of the Atlantic, and relocate to the Pacific. :) (yikes, where the waves are worse, and there are SHARKS!!)
Ugh.
Please tell Edward that I'd be happy to rub salve on his abrasions. ;)
Thank you for the update; you've made me a very happy reader.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
This fic so totally rocks.... I know the boys are going to be alright.... and I'm sure that it will only bring them all closer together.... I hope James dosen't have something up his sleeve, I don't trust him he's being to nice and he just doesn't seem the nice type. I am so glad they have a house together and I love it when he calls her sugar <swoon> Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
You scared the pants off me for a minute! It wasn't pretty.
Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
aww he could feel her there. so cute hope jasper is pkay poor guy. don't think james will pass on the message and i hope jasper now moves to seatlle with the rest great story
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
oh noooo james is going to do something evil, i feel it. urg! good chapter!!!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Oh God, that is a bit evil, but I guess if you were really evil you would have put Edward in the ICU and then left us hanging with him still in a coma, so I guess we should be thankful for small mercies! And what is the deal with James? Looks to me like he's going to try and usurp Bella in her absence ... he's clearly up to something. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Bemused_Banana (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
gaaaaaaaah. I wish I knew what happens next right now!
Great chapter! I'm always astounded at how amazing all these stories are.
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
The poor boys! glad they both seem to be alive and kicking - but why do I fear the somehow Bella and her job will be at odds since she only spoke with James or maybe it will be Bella's apartment?? Hmmmmm??
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Really liked the imagery of being on the ledge and not jumping - captured the sense of being afraid but realizing that you won't ever make things work if you don't take the risk - Loving this story and the ways they are opening up with each other! ;)
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
love it...please continue and soon.....
Reviewer: Lyxa (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
hey!
arggggggggh what a great twist in the story, but i wish you would have written more.
please update soon
xoxo
Lyxa
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
i hope that james doesnt go all jack-a@@ on bella and not tell bruce.
post soon!
Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
oh hell, i think im the one that needs to be sedated ;)
kidding, you had me for a moment there, though!
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