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Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Ohhhh!!!!! More please! Need to know what happens next now please!!

Reviewer: LoriLP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Oh wow, I was going to have a heart attack if you left us hanging - so bless you for that.  My heart was pounding and I couldn't read fast enough to find out if he was okay or not!... And I definitely don't trust James being nice... something is going on there...Please update soon!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG OMG OMG!!!  That was one hell of a shoe to drop.  I mean just wow who would have saw that one coming.  I don't think James is goingto be helpfull at all I think thi sis the ebst chance he has to sabotage Bella.  Crap Now my mind is racing with ideas!  Post again soon!!!!

Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Another amazing chapter, this story just gets better and better i love it x

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Oh I was totally expecting you to leave a major cliffhanger and not tell us that the boys were okay.  Thank you for not doing that.  I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: katieg (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Haha, thanks for not being truly evil. I would have been devastated if Jasper would have still been on life support :) Thanks again! This story rocks by the way!

Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Oooooo, this was so good. I know it's been forever since I have read and reviewed and I have truly missed this story. But alas, I have been writing a story of my own and it's suprising to me how much time away from reading it has taken to write my own fic.

This was just completely WIN. Even though I was heartbroken when that call from Esme came in and I thought "oh no, not Jasper." because just like Em said Alice doesn't deserve to lose him after all that she has been through in her life. But also knowing that life isn't fair and that things such as that happen, so my heart pretty much hit my stomach when I was reading that. 

Anyway, great job loved it all. Love this story, Oh and James is evil. I know he's going to be trying to undermine Bella and I have a sneaky suspicion she's not going to have a job when she gets back to Seattle. I'm just sayin'. He's been gunning for her and her job and now this may have provided the perfect opportunity for him to do just that, take her job!

Can't wait to see where that goes.

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Awesome!

Reviewer: bleachgirl4 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Oh no! Will they be all right?

This story is amazing. Please keep writing and update again soon.

Reviewer: kcull (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

I love it! I need more. So will Edward propose soon??? you write brilliantly.

Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

I love the story and now i hate waiting to see what to jasper.  Jasper and alice is so cute together and I would hate it if anything real bad happen to his cute southern fried butt.  I also like how he interacts with Edward.  Some times that boy just needs a little help in the common sense department.  But then anyone as "good" as him doesn't need a lot of commom sense to get the girl he loves.  I just love that he has been a man-whore all his life and then Bella broke that bad habit in him.  I would love to read more interaction with the rest of the family and friends.

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Wow, that was a rollercoast ride and a half.  I had a feeling things were going too well and something was bound to happen - call me sceptical.  Maybe I just read too much of this fanfic.  l am loving the story though.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Girl... You almost gave me a heart attack with this chapter! Thank Goddess they both pulled through. *has read all 18 chapters over 4 days* I've been hooked since the first paragraph. Fine work, Draven

Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Thank you for not being too evil but it is okay to be evil i like being evil. One thing i dont trust James he is up to something. Keep the chapters coming.

Reviewer: ciao_ama (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

oh wow! what a curve ball! I was really worried, great writting too. thanks for the amazing story!

Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

wow another brilliant story and as always with a new story i run out just as it gets really good i can't wait for the next chapter.

 

love you work

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

thank god for carlisle meeting them at the airport with that mesage.... 

Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Oh no!  What happened exactly? 

Ok.  I have to comment on some of the "Southernisms" in the earlier chapters.  The thing about the types of cokes and dinner is actually lunch and all of that had me laughing until my sides hurt.  I have friends in several different areas of the US and even in Europe (Air Force brat and my mom travels overseas a lot).  I have tried to explain that, but some people just don't get that.  (I live in Mississippi.)  I know whenever I travel, I have been asked to say words like "right" and asked exactly where "yonder" is.  (Since I teach and travel, I can disguise my accent pretty well when I need to, but once I get stressed or tired, I sound like one would expect someone from small town Mississippi to sound.  LOL)

Anyway, great story.  I just read through the 18 chapters that are here, and I hope you update soon.  You know... like before school starts, and I have to be a teacher with no life again.  LOL  (Just kidding... about the teacher with no life part anyway.)

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

I didn't see the accident coming at all.  Thank you for letting us know that Jasper is ok.  I am thrilled that they are all together. 

James is definitely up to no good...between trying to get Bella fired or getting Edward pissed and jealous...I am not sure what to expect.

Your Edward says SUGAR perfectly and at all the right times!

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Ack!! I totally didn't see any of this coming.  Thank goodness they both will be okay (well, hopefully).  Poor Alice must have been a wreck.  AWESOME chapter!!

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Yay!  They are moving along in their relationship, that's great.  James does creep me out a bit, curious at to where that's going.  Great chapter

Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Great chapter! Hope Jasper can recover quickly.  I am concerned about Alice moving to sc.  The group can't be broken up. I think James is no good and up to no good. So, I am definitly looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Emmett is the best...he always comes through when it is necessary.  I am concerned about James and what that hug was all about...yikes...is Edward going to find an email photo?

Running to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Ok, James is going to stab her in the back, right?  Why do I see Bella losing her job or something soon??!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

wonderful chapter, I am glad that both of the boys are going to be alright, but I get the sneaking suspision that James isn't going  to pass on the message and Bella may not have a job when they get back home.

I can't wait to see what haooens when Edward wakes to find Bella in his arms, or find out more about what happen in the surf and what happens when thy get back home. Please don't leave us waiting to long for the next update.

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