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Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

This story is so good. I'm still following it, although I don't read each chapter when they're posted. Great job.

 

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

This was amazing!  I'm so glad that Jasper didn't die!

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Yeah, don't let Jasper die, that would be awful and cruel. How could you let them go surfing? How irresponsible of you. Now make it all better.

I kid, love the story and the sugar.

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Man, still a cliffie though. Now I'm left wanting, NO, Needing, to know what is going to happen. I hope you post another chapter soon because I'm dying for the rest of the story. Excellent story and chapter!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Funny that you added the part in of him calling a Dr. Pepper a Coke. I'm from the east coast and live in Texas now and when I first moved here, I had to have someone explain to me that a Coke could mean a number of sodas. That is definitely a true southern thing! I love the story so far, by the way! Can't wait to see how it all turns out. =)

Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

That was awesome! And i absolutely love edward unconsciously spooning B.

Reviewer: sayitoutloud73 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Thank God you are only half-evil! My heart is in my throat & I thought I was going to be sick when I read about Jasper possibly not making it! Fantastic chapter & I cannot WAIT to read the next one! You are a legend!

Reviewer: crmom (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Another great chapter, you are a great writer that keeps me interested. I can't wait to see what James is pulling -- I know he is up to no good.

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

this was perfect. It made me get all teary eyed and get goosebumps all over, but it was still PERFECT. I love this!

Reviewer: sayitoutloud73 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Really glad Bella is sorting herself out. Another great chapter!

Reviewer: sayitoutloud73 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Oooohhh, bad move, Edward! Silly man!

Reviewer: sayitoutloud73 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

WHAT is her PROBLEM!?! Seriously, she needs to get over herself a bit. I sort of get where she's coming from, but enough is enough! Stupid Bella!

Reviewer: sayitoutloud73 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

No more Sam...hate Sam! So glad Edward got to punch him!

Reviewer: sayitoutloud73 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Sorry that this is only the first time I'm reviewing this story, but I've been enjoying it too much to stop reading! ;) Once again you have written a really wonderful story - I loved Something Stupid too. I just had to review now after reading what you said at the end about Sam & the 'imprinting' bullshit. I completely agree with you & I couldn't have said it better myself. I always felt that Leah got a raw deal in the books. So well done for incorporating that into your story! Genius!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Thanks for getting Jasper off life support!

I'm guessing James didn't pass along Bella's messge, and she comes home to no job? 

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG U scared the shit outta me with the whole Edward and jasper bit!!
Jaz on life support :'(

U gotta love Esme for being so sneaky and tellin the hospital that they are the guys' wives :D Go Esme!

I really wished though that they could all be together and Alice didn't want to move away :S

James so has something up his sleeve the heartless bastard!
he is so gonna get a frying pan to the head from Bella or preferably worse :)

LOL @ Jasper phone cockblocking Edward :D :D :D

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

WOW! She took the plunge and told Edward she loved him! *squee*
And poor Edward having such an intense dream and then waking up realizing bella wasn't really there lol.

OMG Bella talking dirty to Edward :O *gasp* Who would have seen that comin?? lol

Lets Get Dirty! *giggle* Loved it :D

Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

You tease!  At least we know they're not dead, thank you.   Assuming J is going to be OK, right?  Write longer chapters - not enough I want more!   ;-)  Still worried about James and his good intentions, what's up with Bella's boss too?   I want B&E together, but torn because A&J and E&C will all be across the country.   Can't everyone be in the same city?    Can't wait to see what you have planned next!   

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG! Here I am, all excited that Edward's got the job in Seattle and happily anticipating some happy reunions soon and than BAM! But you are right, leaving it with Jasper being on life support would have been soooo evil. I'm thrilled that he's going to be okay. Poor Alice and Bella. That had to be one of the worst flights ever.

I loved Edward excitedly calling Bella at work after he found out he had his dream job and Bella excitedly running over and waking the others up to tell them about Edward moving to Seattle. Loved the debate over apartment vs. house and house winning. House somehow seems more....domestic and permanent than apartment for me.

Pimp daddy Emmett at the club was definitely cute. And I also loved Alice clinging to Bella like a spider monkey after Bella told them about Edward's impending relocation. I totally heard "Hold on tight, spider monkey" in my head.

I have to admit that I was cheering for the South to get E & B cause you know I'm a southern girl, lol, but then again I'm still not ruling it out cause one thing I've learned with this story is to always expect the unexpected (kinda like Big Brother, lol). ;D   But I am still keeping an eye out for some meanness from James. I just can't get over my nagging distrust of him, even while he's being so helpful to Bella. Actually, especially while he's being so helpful to Bella.

Thanks so much for not leaving us hanging with Jazz barely hanging on himself. Though I am very, very excited for both our boys to open their eyes! Terrific chapter!  I try not to ask this often cause I understand it's not always easy, but after this chapter I just have to ask.....Please update again soon! :D

Reviewer: emmettsgirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

thx soooooooo much for not being as mean but I have one request can there be a surprise POV like jasper or emmett?

Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OHMYFREAKINGGOD.

Please update.

Reviewer: pinkstampkat (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Wow!  Great chapter!  I love this story!

Reviewer: pinkstampkat (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Wow!  Great chapter!  I love this story!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

So I just spent all night getting acquainted with your story.  I love it so far but you have me going there for a while with the too good to be true lose your true love as soon as you find them.  Nice save for both Alice and Bella.

What's up with having Bella leave James to tell Bruce she has an emergency?  Isn't that dude after her job?

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG!!! Please dont let anything happen to Jasper! Him and Alice need each other! I cant wait for the next chapter!! I love Edward and Bella...they are the love that I would love to have...

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