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Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Oh I saw that one coming. James is gunning for her job isn't he. So I'm betting it either ends up with Bella running her own restaurant or James's scheming ass getting fired.

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

James is such as ass...and I totally agree with orgams to fix pain - it works on my headheachs everytime :)

Reviewer: MasonsMommy (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Oh no!  Is Bella going to get fired or quit?  Then again, if so, she could open her own restauraunt, so that may not be bad at all.  I'm so happy that the fellas are okay.  Esme loves Bella!  How sweet is that? 

  • I actually received the alert for the new chapt on ff.net before here, but theres something about the black background and red velvet that made me wait until it was ready on here! I wonder ifI'm the only one......

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

What a relief the boys are ok!!! Will Edward be in trouble with his new boss as well? Isn't he supposed to be in Seattle soon? I guess I will just have to stay tuned! ;-)

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Hmmm....So is Bella going to just stay with Edward, leave her stupid job and stupid James behind and then everyone can be together?

That and a proposal from Edward would be great!!!

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

First of all, thank you for updating!  I am really enjoying this story!  I hope that now they can just let Esme and Carlisle finance a restaurant for Bella in Hilton Head and Edward can just work for his fathers firm! 

James sucks!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Ugh I KNEW it!! That prick James I knew he was gonna screw her over!!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Yup...James is an asshole,who said he'd cover for Bella...but obviously didn't..Great chapter,can't wait for the next one. ;D

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

That miracle cure sure sounds like it could work on anything, lol!  I'd be willing to test it out....

I'm so glad that Jasper is fine.  Well, maybe not fine, because he still has to put up with Alice's wedding planning, hee hee!  And James is a douche...he's been gunning for Bella's job...I hope things get sorted out, one way or another!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

oh shit....james is an ass...but i'm glad the boys are ok....can't wait for more

Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I'm glad Jasper and Edward are ok.  But I knew James was gonna be a jerkwad!  I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Oooh, don't tease that way, sugar!

Reviewer: Lyxa (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

hey!

what a great chap :D i'm so relieved that jasper's ok.

please update soon

xoxo

Lyxa

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

omg think my heart stopped there, couldnt read the words quick enough to make sure they were ok, in fact i might have to go back & read that chapter again incase i missed anything, whew, incase you hadnt guessed with all my reviews, i read ss this morning & then straight onto this all in the one day so as the biggest favour to me please please dont keep us waiting too long for next chapter, loving ure work

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

looking fwd to next chapter, but before i read it i think bella should head over to hhi & open up her own restuarant then they all win & possibly later chapters emmett & rose can join in the hhi party by building holiday homes haha, anyhoo now you can see why ure the writer & not me & again you rock

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

you are soooooooo bad, that was just cruel hmph

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

oh no & it was just getting good, why why why do you guys all try to kill us with the angst haha, but on the other hand if she doesnt want him i can think of a number of people ( myself at top of said list) that would love to

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)

aawwww bless, i love it love it love it

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)

mwah thats all i can say

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)

awsome awsome awsome, i forgot to review last chapter but i loved the whole painting thing hilarious, you absolutley rock

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

im loving that its fast, life is too bloody short lol

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

why cant they just get their shit together from the start of a story instead of us only gettint the happy ever after for a couple chapters hmmmm, suppose the angst wouldnt be as good

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)

nooooooooo, not jake cmon

Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

Anybody else concerned that JAMES was the one who took that message...  ???

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG, I read this whole story straight through, and I really thought you were going to leave it with a cliffie.  Thank God you didn't, I don't know what I would have done.  I'm really liking this little story of yours.  I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.  Please hurry!!!

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