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Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
i could guess as to where things are going...but you're always surprising me so i suppose i have to resort to waiting for an update ;)
great chapter, per usual.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew James was up to no good!!!! I am so glad the boys are alright!! Bella should not worry about the job, she can get a job anywhere!!! I hope this doesn't make to much trouble between Edward and Bella.... they are so sweet together!!!! I love this!!! Thanks for updating!!
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Motherfucking James! I knew he was gonna pull that shit and not tell Bruce about Bella's emergency! UGH!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
oh that little asshole set Bella up..I knew you were going to go there, cause that is where my head went..but I was hoping I was wrong.
Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
I won't agree that they are moving way too fast. they are 27ish, single and it's Edward and Bella..of course it's crazy hot and instant attraction/love whatever. I love this story, and it's only the 2nd au-human story I've read...definately my fav so far.
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Ooh, you're ending notes have me wondering.... Hmmm. I'm so glad Jasper and Edward are okay, even if Bella is in trouble now. I'm wondering if Bella is going to say screw the stress and quit, and maybe open her own restaurant.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew it! I knew that SOB wasn't going to relay her message. I really hope that she doesn't lose her job. They are buying a house in Seattle and Edward got his dream job there. However, they could always all move to Hilton Head together. Hmmm... not sure which would be better. I just know it needs to have a happy outcome! ;)
I love this story and this was another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew it I knew it!!!! Man F that job Bella and open your own restaurant and Edward can design and build it LOL!!! SQUEE!! Post again soon!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew James was going to do something sneaky. Hopefully Bruce will listen to Bella's explanation. I'm sure there are some surprises coming,
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Aww Bella. I would have been embarrassed also, but it is Edward. So who cares, go for it.
Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
great chapter and i am not even going to guess where this is going i am just going to enjoy the ride
can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
why is bruce pissed? didn't james explained why bella wasn't at work? or he did and bruce does not care about her excuse?
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew she couldn't trust James. Edward is such a hero and Bella should move out there and start her own resturant.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Great chapter, Glad everyone is ok. I enjoyed the little "talk" between Bella and Esme. I'm looking forward to Bella kicking James' ass.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Holy shit more please more, you can't leave us hanging like that.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
James is a dick, but we already knew that! Bella has outgrown Bruce so if he is too uptight, then she can move right on! I loved Esme's mothering! Edward's treatment seemed to work quite well!
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
oh oh.. watch out for bruce..
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Great chapter!
I hope Bella doesn't go back. Edward needs her.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
yeah they are both ok
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Yeah, I figured James would 'forget' to tell Bruce. Hmmm, interested to see how this pans out.
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Great chapter! I really liked the different POV's! Also thought the line “Bella, fuck me gently and spare my aching body, or I’ll fuck you rough and damn the consequences!” was fanfreakingtasitc! Is Bella getting fired? Was Esme remembering Edward saying Bella should open a restaurant of her own some foreshadowing? Hope we find out soon!
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
oh shit james is an ass. i would assume that bruce would understand when bella explains but i don't know now.
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Man, I'm glad they were ok....dying to know what you meant by that last sentence!!!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Damn James!
Awesome as always! :-)
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Thanks for the update. i love this story!
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