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Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

another wonderful and entertaining chapter, I just loved Bella and Esme's mother in law, daughter in law talk. I love that every thing is starting to work out for our favourite couples, even if Bella is in trouble with her boss. Might be the push she needs to open her own resturant.

I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.

Reviewer: Abco2008 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Ohhh James, can't say I'm surprised!!!  I hope he gets the sack for that little stunt, or it could be the incentive that Bella needs to go out on her own.  Really glad that I found your story, have just finished all 19 chapters.  Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Knew that fucker was going to pull some shit, but there was no way in that situation Bella was going to think about that. I am happy they are ok though. I love Esme...the little hear to hear was priceless.

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I agree.  I have no idea where this is going, and I'm loving it!!!  Was waiting for James to reveal how wicked he is!

Recomending O treatments written by WnderngY for any and all injuries, illnesses or Boo-boos!  ;D  They're damn effective.  lol

 

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Glad the boys are going to be okay.  I can't wait to find out what is going to happen with her job.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

James is an ass!  I knew he wasn't going to tell Bruce where she went! 

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

i knew he would pull somthing  ut oh

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

What's got into Bruce?

Anyway, amazing chapter! The spacing is just a little bit hard to read, but great work nonetheless!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: RescueMe17 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I have 3 ideas of what could happen.

 

1. Bella tells Bruce what happens, and he understands, and lets her stay away as long as she needs to.

 

2. Bella tells Bruce what happens, and he dosen't give a flying fuck and fires her ass!

 

3. Bella beats James ass in the ground with a bat!

 

I really think that # 3 will happen, =]

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

oh no.. i was actually already thinking if bella would be in trouble at her job because she's been taking a lot of days off lately. and then add james who i'm sure have been adding fuel to the fire.. i was really hoping that bella be the one to move to florida since alice is also moving there.. and then charlie and renee plan to retire there. but then again edward already accepted the job and they already bought a house.. so it could get complicated. i'm glad that jasper is okay now.. and edward no doubt is fantastic since he was able to have sex already! haha.. =)

Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Once Jasper fell asleep again, I went to call Kate and Tony to give them an update, while Carlisle went to pick up Bella and Alice at the airport.

 

Who's tony? I thought Kate was married to Garrett...

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

glad everyone is ok but is bella going to still have a job. Hmmm we shalle see and james does suck big time.

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

James is a mealey mouthed, ********ing, weasley little sonofabitch, among other things.  And, I would never presume to know what you might have in store for us, but I sincerely hope it isn't too heinous.  Just sayin'.  

 

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Way to go James! Make yourself look like the good guy when you clearly are not! I knew he couldn't be trusted! But I'm glad everyone is alive and well!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I love this story. Riptides are scarry. And I still want to be called sugar. Looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I love Esme!  She always knows how to prod things along in the right direction.  Bella and Edward are so perfect for one another!  They really are able to connect and just be togehter and in love!

James is a real bastard...I guess he threw her under the bus with Bruce!

Can't wait to see what happens next!  Great chapter.

Reviewer: ciao_ama (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Whew! Great chapter, amazing story!!!!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

Edward and Jasper are doing OK, so that's good.  Alice and Jasper are planning their wedding... poor tortured Jasper!  hehe Edward and Bella are together, so all is right in that part of the world, but I had a feeling James didn't pass along Bella's message.  Geez, what a jerk!

Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)

In one of the chapters, you refer to Bella's parents as Phil and Renee. Just letting you know, you might want to fix that :-) Sorry i can't remember exactly where it is right now...

Reviewer: Mama_Marinara (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I knew James was going to do that. That sneaky bastard! So glad both the guys are going to be ok.

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

I knew that James wouldn't pass on the message! Will Bella lose her job and then move south to be with Edward and the family? But then he would have to look for another job...maybe he'll help her open her own place!

Reviewer: skimbo06 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

no way i had a bad feelin...jerk! now she can move to him

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

*gasp!* what's happening with Bella's job?! Yay! Everyone is ok!!

Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)

I can totally see Alice and Jasper making a sex painting!! that is the funniest thing I've ever thought about!!!

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