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Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Oh hell no, I don't care if you're the almighty mighy of almighyness but I wouldn't have my boss talking to me like that! I hope Edward snatches the phone out of her hands and tells Bruce what for. I wonder what that jerkoff James did or didn't do.
I'm so glad Jasper is going to be ok. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Im so glad to see that Jasper and Edward made it alive and thngs are good. and James is an ass.. sounds like he didnt tell Bruce what happend... Cant wait to see is going to take place next.. update again soon!
Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Oooh I knew it, James is a first class jerk. I say we string him up on a flagpole by his undies and leave him up there through the winter.
Wow I come up with weird stuff at 5 am...
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
*Happy Dance* I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! Okay, I'm not happy that Bella is in trouble, welll, I guess maybe I am because I'm with Esme on the front of what would make things perfect, but I am thrilled because I love being right, lol. James IS an ass! :D
And then you have to leave that little note and burst my happiness bubble. I kinda like where I think it is headed, and it isn't headed there? So where are we headed? Argh! You're evil, woman! Pure evil. J/K. ;)
I love cures for stuff in NSiaSMB. I want a cure like that, lol. I'll make up a disease if I have to.
Soooo happy that my Jazzy is okay and on the mend!
And I loved, loved, loved, loved, loved, loved the surprise Esme pov in there. I know switching povs around a lot is not popular with some people, but I adore getting different povs!
Loved the chapter, but maybe not the last cryptic little comment, lol. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
James is going to force Bella out and her and Edward will move down where Edward is now to be with Alice and Jasper and not far from her parents and then Emmette will follow cause he misses them.
James is an ass.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
definitely! Screw James! He is an ass! Bruce should get over it!
Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Girl, you are closing in on 2000 reviews! Impressive. Most impressive.
:)
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Great chapter
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
love this story. can so see this in real life. Hard to trust anyone that good lookin and add to that Bella's last relationship and I can see her back peddling for real. Look forward to ur next update.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I guess the obivous answer is Bella needs to get fired so she can move to SC with the gang, but...probably not judging by the A/N!
Another fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I have some ideas about where this is headed I'l just have to wait and see if any of them are right. They all revolve around Bella losing her job because of James. The results of that are what my ideas are about. One of which is Bella opening her own restaurant with the where being a big question. :) I'm glad Jasper is ok. :)
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I KNEW this would happen. James is not only a SOB but he is also an idiot! It seems that he didn't tell Bruce what happened? if so, bad move, idiot! Bad move!
Esme caught me by surprise. I didn't think that was what she had an issue with. But Bella surprised me more with her answer.
Honestly, it would be lovely if they would just move to the island and Bella would open a seafood restaurant!! Alice is moving there already! Let's take Emmett and Rose too, and they could work all together. The End! ahahha
I know things are not that simple and thank goodness for that. What a boring fic that would be, right?
Thx for the update!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Awww c'mon ,just let Carlisle and Esme set BELLS UP IN BUSINESS, who neds Bruce and James ?
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Yay! Edward punched Sam in defense of Bella. I hope it convinces Sam to stay away but I guess I'll have to read on to find out. :)
Reviewer: cullenswanson (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
please! im dying to know what happens next i cant wait! i think bella should get fired and edward should propose and then have a triple wedding after em finally gets the balls to ask rose and bella can open her own southern diner yay! .......... well i can dream right? : ) oh and who is tony?
Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Maybe it's time for bella to start her own resturant with partners of course. This was very good but I want MORE!!!!!!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
OOOOO....that James is a shit! I knew he wasn't going to pass Bella's message along to Bruce. GAH!!!
So glad that Jasper and Edward are alive and well. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Screw Bruce - she should just move anyway!
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I've missed a few chapters...but, finally I'm all caught up and I'm damn glad I did. You had me scared for Edward and Jasper.
Can't wait to see what you got coming next...
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Well, there are two choices... it all gets straighten out or she gets fired. I knew James was going to burn her, damn him! But yes, Edward and Jasper are okay and that is all that matters.
Reviewer: melj28 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
All i can say is that bella is seriously making a mistake. who wants to live in nasty old seattle when HHI is an option? i mean really! screw edward's dream job. screw bella's job. be beach bums if necessary.
loved the chapter. and edward's "fuck me gently" line will probably be featured in my dreams for nights to come. holy crap that was hot. i love a southern edward.
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Ok, I will say I am terrible at reviewing when I first start a story that is already so far along but here it finally is. I love the story and had to keep reading to this point. James is shady but I can't wait to see where things go from here, I was pleasantly surprised by previous chapters!!! ;)
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Are you being sneaky??? Great chapter.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
You should patent that medical cure. GENIUS!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Yeah, we've already established that you know how to throw us twists and turns that are unexpected, it has become almost expected. Thank you so much for the birthday shout out! As I told you on the thread while FF was being retarded I'm still loving the story, and I'm glad you are no where near finished!
Manda
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