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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Stupid James and his childish antics. I so think Bella should open up her own restaurant. She'd be great!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I've loved this story from day one, and HOT DAMN it just gets better and better! Here's to more of it! WOO-HOO!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
So, in the chapter before the last, Edward was due to arrive in Seattle in 9 days. Why does he have to go back to SC for several more weeks now? Am I reading this wrong? Are the next 3 weeks inclusive of additional things besides him moving there?
I think Edward is right though. Bella should open her own restaurant. This was another great chapter and I can't wait to read the next.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I have to say I really enjoy these characters having jobs that require their attention instead of the money just falling from the sky, it makes them seem more like real people. Thanks for making Bruce not be sucha bad guy after all! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Great work!
I hate James... sigh
Please update soon!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I hope Bella doesn't lose her job to James....I sense a throwdown in the future. She has knives, and knows how to use them, lol! Maybe Bruce will help her start her own restaurant...never know! Great chapter :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I hope Bella doesn't lose her job to James....I sense a throwdown in the future. She has knives, and knows how to use them, lol! Maybe Bruce will help her start her own restaurant...never know! Great chapter :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Really nice chapter! Can't wait for Edward to move in with Bella! Will they stay in Seatle or will it be to much being away from Alice/Jasper and the rest of his family? Well I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Oh, it's never enough! This was great, but please write more soon. :-)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
well I really hope James gets to be made out as the ASS that he is!!!!!
Good chapter...nice transition! I can't wait for them to get into their house! I hope Bella doesn't lose her job because it sounds like she isn't ready for the next step!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Can't wait for more....lovely chapter. Loved it when she broke out the old nightshirt and they talked about the photos...too cute!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Great chapter!
I think Edward should go and talk to James...Better yet, have Bella do it. XD I think she beat him up.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
AWWWWW!
Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Great story! Keep it coming.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Much too short...but I am still thankful for your work and posting!! I think I'm just ready for Bella and Edward to start their life together in Seattle.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
That was a sweet fluffy chapter. I knew James would pull that shady shit.
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
James is still alive, so of course there will be angst ahead. James must be punished.
Edward and Bella looking at pictures and envisioning their life together was sweet. Loved the awkward moment in Jasper's hospital room.
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Great story.
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Well hell, when southern - comfortward says "be prepared", lots & lots of things come to mind... but lets just stop that porn train at the station! cold shower anyone?
Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
What a tease with the "be prepared, sugar!" Looking forward to the mental images of Edward, naked, doing the dishes!
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
mmm... can't wait to see if she was truly prepared!!! ;)
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Whoa..i never would have thought something like this would happen
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
great chapter!!! i can't wait for the next!!
Reviewer: wildcatlizzie (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Oh no! James is such a douche.
Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Well i am expecting James is trying to get Bella's job, but i hope her boss doesnt fall for that, i will be mad lol.
Loved the chapter, absolutely love this story, cannot wait for more.
I have to say i loved the line where Edward said. “Bella, fuck me gently and spare my aching body, or I’ll fuck you rough and damn the consequences" one hell of an amazing line, top notch in all honesty x
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