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Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
yeah, impriinting sucks. It didn't work out too bad in Twilight. It could have been so much worse! What if a wolf was married with kids before he met his imprint?!!!!
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Alice has got to be THE BESTEST friend ever. EVER. She sat that up for them very well and even pulled in Jasper's assistance.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
James is such a douche. I hope that Bruce and Bella can settle their problems and that Bella won't get unfairly judged due to what James did.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Another super chapter. I really love this story. They all do make the perfect set of couples. I love your characterization and your story telling ability. I hope Bella nails James and he gets canned at the restaurant. ; ) Thanks for taking the time to write such a cool story.
Hugs
Joan
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I'm really looking forward to Bella ripping James a new one, and I wouldn't mind Edward helping out. I love this story, it's so sweeet. I'll be egerly awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
You have such a knack for sharing the best of these people. Whether in a crisis or contemplating the future, the love which exists abounds.
Ready for whatever you throw at me, since I know that you always guide us back to a good place.
And I know you'll take care of James...one way or another.
Ready for more when you have it.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I was so excited when I realized you had updated! Now, let's see. How can we kill James? That would be worthwhile. I'm so glad that Edward and Bella had some time together and the boys are on the mend. I like the family dynamics and the little "slip" about a wedding for Bella. Oops!
I'd like to see Rose and Emmett in the story more, but I don't know how that's going to happen, at this point. Perhaps after the move?
I'm looking forward to Bella and Bruce having a conversation about the future. That should be interesting...
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Thank you ! Great Chapter!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Edward washing dishes naked...always prepared for that! Loved Bella's slip of the tongue...and it seems to shock Edward a bit.
Great chapter and I am definitely prepared for more.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I love Edward. He is so fun. I love your story and will be watching for your update.
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
awww.. damn that james.. evil evil man.. i love ed/bella stories and can't wiat for their happy ending. thanx for writing
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Loved it! I'm glad Bruce seemed to calm down after learning that James had not relayed the proper message...I think underneath the veneer he's a good guy. But I'm still concerned about this "we have to talk" business! Oh, and James needs to die a painful, horrible death...just sayin' ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Well, I knew all along that James was a sleeze....Please update again soon, I can't wait to see what the boss man has to say.. ;D Awsome chapter. ;D
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I really, really, really, hate cryptic and ominous ANs. Lol. Just kidding. But I do think that there must a course out there or something for FF writers. "How to Drive Your Readers Crazy and yet Tantalize them into Coming Back for More".
Still, it was nice to get a sweet little chapter here with them ALL TOGETHER and ALL IN SC! And to get to hear someone else bashing on James! Go Edward!
Loved it! And looking forward to finding out what Bella should be prepared for.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
hi WndrngY (what does that stand for?),
loved this chapter. Loved the time Bella and Edward got together. James is such a bastard. Hope Bella won't have any trouble because of him.
Great work. Looking forward to more.
Sarah
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
hmmm ahaha love it. keep going
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Jake? Really?
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
thanks for the update it was awesome! James Sucks!
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Awww poor Edward had word vomit... Idiot! Sigh.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
hmmm, i wonder if it wouldn't be better for bella and edward to wind up on the east coast with everyone else. she'll have to decide that on her own terms, however.
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Okay I was mad at the two couples for a second. Usually I am the extra wheel and I loathe those types of situations!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I loved them looking at the house pictures together and talking about what they would be doing in their new home.
James needs to back off. Maybe Bella can scare him while he's cooking and he can accidentally cut of a few digits. LOL.
Reviewer: MrsB (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Piggly Wiggly!! Yes! I'm looking forward to a vacation in Edisto in a few months and this story makes me want to go sooooo bad! You really capture what that part of SC is to me- So laid back and magical.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Lovely! I hope that back stabber James gets what's coming to him.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
LoL I Lurve me some southern-fried Eddie ^__^
& James sucks Big time!!
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