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Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I love this Edward....he can call he "Sugar" anytime!!! :0)
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
great!!!!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Ok, first off, what a wonderful surprise to see an update this morning, since I don't remember there being any discussion that this chapter was almost finished!
Second, that was A-MAZING. I can't believe Bruce's offer. That is extraordinary!!! I have a feeling she is going to take it and open a restaurant on HHI, because Edward is going to HATE working for Francke and will want to move home when he finds out about the offer from Bruce.
Such a sweet sweet homecoming! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Manda
Reviewer: icedvovo (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
That was great, I loved that they got caught!
I hope they have their HEA living in the south together :)
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Ha ha that is funny. I think Ed and Jasper got matching tatoo's.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
cant wait for sawwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttt edward
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I would be scared to work around James.The hot kitchen is a bad place to have some one not like you. Great Chapter.
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Another great chapter. Wow..Bellas has a lot to think over. That would make me a little worried. But I'm glad that Edward is back!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: easilydistracted (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Yay, Paige! Thanks for a great update with minimal angst and a great lemon!!! So is this the calm before the storm? Edward starts work with Tom on Monday, right? ;-D
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
oh I can't wait. I am sure there will be angst with Edward's new job and there will be tension between the two until they figure it out but I bet they end up back in the south!!!!
That was priceless how they got walked in on. AWESOME!
Glad you are still writing even after what happened. I live this story.
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
please dont make bella move now that they finally together
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Thanks for updating! :-)
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
and yet again, jacob screws thigs up...
I loooooooooooooooooovvvvveee this!!!!!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I am glad to see that you are continuing this wonderful story over here. I was so afraid you would abandon it completely. Keep up the wonderful writing. I am so sorry for allt the trouble you have had lately.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
God you write beautifully. I loved this chapter and particularly their reunion. I want me an Edward just like that.
Well, Bruce's proposal was pretty interesting, I wonder how B & E will work that out? I'm glad that Bruce is aware of James' tactics. Hopefully he's get his just deserts (pun intended LOL).
Just wanted to also say that I can't believe that someone would steal your work. That is just unbelievable and so wrong.
Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Okay, so I have to request that James doesn't become a personal threat. I don't know if I can handle Edward or (Possessiveward) to get into an...altercation with him...
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
To the last scene with Edward:
ya gotta do what ya gotta do....
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
that is hillarious, just loved it
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
OK, you won't believe it. i am here on vacation in the outer banks. I can't wait to see how this thing progresses....
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Alrighty, I officially love Bruce now ;-) Just as I loved this chapter. I've had a feeling all along that Edward moving to Seattle would not be as clear-cut as it seemed, and I'm still thinking they might eventually end up down south. There's just something in my gut telling me that. I also had the feeling early on that this job with Francke might not be all it's cracked up to be with Edward...the guy just seemed a bit too eccentric and disorganized for Edward. But I'm looking forward to finding out, either way, how you play out this new development!
Oh, and I'm sorry you recently had to deal with plagiarism - I've had friends in other fandoms, as well as this one, who've experienced that, and it just plain sucks. I'm glad it was resolved, though!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
You are a great writer! Loved this chapter.
Reviewer: ocd-ang (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
"We were finally fully in one place together. There would be no more leaving, no more uncertainty about what tomorrow would bring for us."
What a wonderful line, but it broke my heart to read it. Yes, Edward has his dream job, but would he enjoy it as much if she weren't there with him. Ugh.
I've been posting my first story here on twilighted and I have to tell you how much I have enjoyed your story. I now know as a new author how important reviews are, so I am dilligently reviewing and providing feedback.
I love your story, the twists, the drama and the sexin' is always good! Is there really a better way to break in a new mattress? I think not. :)
Love the Burn Notice reference. It's hands down one of my faves.
Love the style house you chose, another one of my faves.
You made me laugh that Edward is trying to coax her out of the Volvo!
Keep up the good work!!!!
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
oo the plot thickens, right as i thought it was winding to an end. can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response: No, no! Definitely not winding up yet. There are quite a few more twists up my sleeve!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
great part
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
I'm interested in seeing how the whole James thing plays out. He's such a scumbag!
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