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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Great chapter!! I can't wait for the next but that's the way it's been through this whole story! LOL Love it!!
Joan
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Wow! So much happened in this chapter! But I'm proud of Bella for realizing that she had time to figure things out. Bruce's opportunity is very tempting, but it may not be right for her. Edward may have gotten his dream job, but his real motivation to move to Seattle was Bella. He's already sacrificed for her. As for James, Bella better keep one eye trained on him at all times! We all know he's scuzzy! I love that Edward feels warm and fuzzy at Bella making a home for them and I love that he will not keep secrets from Bella. Sorry that someone stole your words, some people can be so underhanded!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Great chapter!
Edward showing up early was awesome!
James will probably flip when he hears that he's not a threat to Bella.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Well, douchebag James won't be happy that Bruce doesn't consider him to be even Bella's replacement. Maybe Bruce will compromise with Bella and open a Southern-themed restaurant in Seattle? She has plenty of access to awesome Southern cooking through Esme....
I loved their reunion! Too funny with Emmett almost breaking down the door, too!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: nepenthean_kiss (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Incredible! I almost always find FF 'Bellas' to be simpering, weak and one-dimentional but Chef Bella is cute, funny and clever, she watches one of my favorite shows and I was already sold on Edward son from way back so, complete win!!!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Wonder how Edward will handle the news of Bruce's proposal?
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
This story is great, I love it!
It wouldn't be so bad if Edward ended up hating working for Franke, then they decided to move back to Hilton Head...thus creating the new restaurant opportunity.
Reviewer: nerac (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Thank you for the update, Paige! I was so concerned you wouldn't finish because of the jerks who stole from you. I'm so sorry that happened!
I loved the update, he was adorable coming to surprise her and I'm definitely looking forward to finding out just what Jasper's hiding. ;)
Reviewer: nepenthean_kiss (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
I am loving this so far! Edward is hilarious and Awkward's POV the morning after was adorable :D now I have to get back to reading.....
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I SOOOO love this story. The chapter was great. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
LOL!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
they are so sweet he ploting how to get her car and she thinking of putting aside a great deal for him.
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I see Edward not being happy with his job and them moving back to the south and Bella opening a restaurant there.
Reviewer: jgj18023 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Thank you for continuing this story over here. I was so bummed when you took it down on fanfic, but i enjoyed this new chapter and hope to be able to read much more from you.
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
great chapter!!!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
cant wait for more
Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
::Sigh:: Edward saying y'all....my heart just melted!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Totally didn't see Bella's job situation going in that direction, great twist. Hmmm..... wonder what Jasper is hiding.......
Reviewer: MaleficentKnits (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
interesting... does J have a kid?
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
hm...definitely curious about Jasper's secret, but I don't think it's something bad. The meeting w/ Bruce was great! I like that character a bunch. Can't wait for how Edward will react to Bella's new job opportunity. Good job!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Okay, so if I remember right in the beginning Edward was just looking for a job that was different from the kind his father's firm was like. That this job was just a "for the time being and for experience". Right? So, he wouldn't be against going back home to work for his father in say, three months or whatever time it took to build the restaurant. And that would put them all together again. Well, without Emmett and Rose though. Hmmm.. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Bwahaah I was wondering about the three of them showing up. I thought maybe it was after all that. Love Emmett. Love. :P
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
hmm i was thinking it was a tattoo, but i think bella might have ah, noticed that. hmm...
Author's Response: No comment...but she wouldn't necessarily have noticed a tattoo yet, would she? Depending on where it was? Not there is one. :D
Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I am SO Sorry that happened to you, I swear, some people! I love your story and am glad you got the "faker" removed!
I am anxious to see what Jasper is hiding from ALice! Heehee!
Author's Response: Thanks--it was frustrating of course, but the level of support and offers to hunt her down and kick her ass have more than made up for it! :D Jasper's secret will be revealed right away in the next chapter.
Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
James is a turd, as always, and he will try to hurt her somehow! He's naughty. And not the good kind. I'm very glad Bruce didn't buy into James' crap game and still loves Bella.
And too funny letting them get caught! That was fun!
Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't let Bruce be that stupid. He recognizes true talent when he sees it.
And I think I may have some sort of issue b/c I really like letting my characters get caught or almost-caught doing naughty things (the good kind)!
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