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Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

I bet that tool that stole your story is named James.  I glad you continued and I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Now that is a Homecoming!!! lol

I don't know what to think about this new job offer for Bella. I think she should open her own place up.

Great update, I loved it. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

I am glad James won't be a problem professionally but Bruce's proposal is not all sunshine and rainbows... can't wait to see how it will all work out, especially since edward just moved there (hopefully bella's career can advance in another way)!!!  ;)

Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

::Sighs:: Edward and sugar... This is wonderful! Can't wait to see what happens! I love work-ethic Bella, non-stalker (well, sort of) Edward, and laid-back stoner-artist Jasper. I also looove Esme as an old-South momma - just what I'd always pictured her to be!

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Great chapter!    I love Emmett interaction!  I hope this is leading the way I hope and somehow you get all of them back down to HH!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Wonderful chapter!!!  As always you amaze me by your radiant views of these characters swoon!

Post again soon I just can't wait to find out teh secret and then eventually the answer to Bruces question!!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

aaaaawwwwww shiiit!!!!!!!  I hope the restaurant thing works out for Bella in the grand scheme of things!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! TAKE THAT JAMES!!!!!!!!!!

Hmmmmm I wonder what is so private between Jasper and Edward...that should be fun to read about...I wonder if Bella and ALice will like it!?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

I am melted from the sexiness of this chapter. For some reason, this bit hit me especially hard (that's what she said): "  Hard and deep and relentless, I thrust into her over and over, coming to edge of release and forcing it back "

WOW!!!!!!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

What will she do? I can't wait to find out what Jasper is not telling Alice; or what Bella's decision will be. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Loved it...Great chapter.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

This isn't going to turn into one of those 'Gift of the Magi' things, is it?  He moves to Seattle, is miserable at his job, but stays because he moved there for her - while she has an opportunity to advance her job and move back where he was happy but stays for him?  But they love the house - and it's so great...no, maybe it will all work out?  I'm confused...but I like that! :)

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Awesome!!! I cant wait till the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Pink Lemonade (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

YAY! I am so happy for an update!  I hate what happened but am glad it is at least resolved - I still cannot believe someone just stole your writing like that.  It is a good thing that you found out!!  I wonder how often it happens and no one knows?  I loved the chapter!  Edward is such a sweetie, sugar!  I love that he surprised her and that she has sense enough to love the surprise this time!  I am afraid James is going to do something horrible to Bella or Edward - I hope Edward kicks his ass!

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

I knew it lol your way to young for bobby  but it would have been a hoot if you told me it was Guy!

Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

aahhhhhh!!!! not fair why do the chapters always seem so short. i know i am impatient but i want to know now. oh well guess i can't.

 

keep up the excellent work can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Love. It. Southern Cullens are my new obession :)

Reviewer: cullenswanson (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

i love this story! i check twice a day to see if its updated so with much love and respect..... PLEASE!! UPDATE FASTER!  K thanks!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Gah, I loved this chapter!!!  Your end notes pretty well summed up the highlights I've been thinking about (as I fan myself with printer paper)!

Nice twists this chapter!  And here I had entertained the notion that this might be a fairly superficial fic...silly me!!!  Love it!

Thanks for writing!!!

Reviewer: miss_alice (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

I love this story but i'm beginning to have sinking feeling in my stomach. The feeling that this Bruce proposition won't give me the giddy and they lived happily ever after ending I was hoping for. I only say this becuase "Something Stupid" ended in a way I was not at all expecting and it was a bit of a Debbie Downer. Please don't do that to this story.

Reviewer: nepenthean_kiss (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

 I'm glad Bella likes the way he calls her 'sugar' because it reminds me of my step-dadday and he's no Edward. ANYWAY...........I love the way Bella handled Sam and I agree with you one hundred percent on the imprinting thing  :)

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

So sorry to hear that someone stole your story. That just sucks. I am happy your still writing it and will keep posting it here on the twilighted story boards. Loved the new chapter and am looking forward to more from your Bella and Southern Edward.=-D

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

Yay!  Edward is there and they've "christened" their new house.  Well... the bedroom anyway. *snicker*

I'm glad that Bruce can see through James' nonsense and he's no threat to Bella's position at the restaurant.  That's an interesting offer Bruce made to Bella.

There are so many different ways you can take this story.  I'm really looking forward to see what you do with them now.  I really can't wait!

Reviewer: nepenthean_kiss (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

Good GOD woman!!! you can't do that!... who was your celebrichef?? come on...your secret's safe here ;D

ps~great chapter!

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

go bella use make james feel like the child he is, i wonder how the talk with edward will go about the new opportunity, loving this story please not too long for next update, im greedy i know lol

Reviewer: jenniferpattinson (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

I don't think they are moving too fast at all. I think it's written perfectly, since the whole point is two people finding an 'immediate soul-mate connection,' while fighting a limited time frame. Plus, seriously who wouldn't want a southern drawl speakin' Edward? God, sign me up! ; ) Great story!!!

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