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Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Aww poor Edward, he's got it bad. And he used to be a commitment phobe!? Wow just shows the way the right person can change you. >.< he he Anyway, great chapter! Loved the back story of Alice's parents! They sound horrible but it certainly explains why Alice is the way she is, so colourful, she's obviously making up for when she wasn't. I hope Jasper does propose to her. She'll deffinetely say yes if he does, I'm sure! :D
Reviewer: Lyxa (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
hey!
thanks for updating with this chap :D
ahhh, it seems like bella has a couple of decisions to make. i hope work won't interfere with her and edward's relationship.
please update soon
xoxo
Lyxa
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Damn! I wanna have a dream like that! One that continues anyway ;)
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Wow, to think that Sam didn't tell Emily about Bella either! That's just ridiculous! But yay for Edward! I loved how protective he was of Bella and what he said at the end.... and I'm beyond relieved that Bella wasn't angry with him, but of course now I'm worried that Edward's got something that could come back to haunt them.... Anyway, great chapter!
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
FLING???? Heh.....this is love at first sight!!1
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
OMFG! I Loved it! but then again, don't I always?? ;) I love me some SouthernWard..."sugar" *swoon*
I was wondering what the "thing" is that Jaz is hiding from Ali, I can't wait to find out what it is!!
I love Edward *sigh* lol
WOW that was a serious fantastic proposal that Bruce had for B! Talk about Dream come true, it's just that, I wonder what's gonna happen now.
And I LOVED that homecoming!! *THUD* Take me Edward! haha He took her alright...*DED*
OMG thank Jeebus edward closed the door on time or the three stooges would have gotten an eyeful LOL.
Loking forward to the next update bb. You totes rock hard!
ALso I can't believe someone stole your lines for their fic!! that so sucks ASS!! Don't they know they're gonna get caught? *shakes head* You deserve to be pissed about that.
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Love it!!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Please don't tell me Bella's going to be angry with Edward! He was brilliant! He tried to stay calm but Sam was being an arse so deserved everything he got! Huzahh! lol Great chapter! But somehow things seem to be going too well and I'm worried that things can't stay this good for long. :S
Reviewer: susanrb45 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
i like!
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
good first chapter!
wtm
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I'm looking forward to reading this....
Reviewer: jadsmama (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
i think its great that bella pulled rank with James- show him who the boss is!!
Its so funny that Edward was putting effort into findinbg out Bella's 2nd car choice instead of just buying a volvo for himself. MEN they dont think sometimes.
I love that he surprised her early and he loved her grungy outfit. so cute!!
Reviewer: chbestcase (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
love the story. don't throw the angst back in when these kids are finally in a good place. she should open her own place!
Reviewer: edwardsisobel (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
A lovely story, thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Another great chapter as usual, I was so excited to see an update! Your Edward is probably one of my favs, he is so damm sexy and sweet it hurts! Love how he suprised Bella and well the glad to see you sex, well..... Are the going to move to the south? I see it coming sooner or later with Jasper/Alice and the rest of his family down there. Great story!!!!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
i loved it and cant wait for more
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Too bad ole Bruce couldn't have decided to open the new resturant before Edward uprooted his life. It's all good, I'm sure it will work out in the end.
This was a nice chapter, thanks for the update.
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
You're here You're here STILL!
So glad that the other site and the evil wordburglar didn't break your spirit, and thank you for this chapter! Just perfect melange of satisfaction and curiosity for the reader.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
I love that she told ALice everything!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
I love all the secret boy nods, winks and gestures... its another world!
Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Yay! I was so happy to see this update! Thank you!
Hmm...so I'm wondering what Jasper doesn't want Alice to know yet. The way edward and him were talking it didn't sound bad, so maybe it's a surprise for the wedding, maybe something to do with the honeymoon. I dunno, but something tells me it's good. I'm prolly completely wrong.
I loved that Edward surprised her at the house. That was really sweet and fun to read. Ugh, and each sugar made me swoon, you'd think I'd be used to that by now.
I'm glad to see that James isn't a threat and Bruce respects Bella more than she knew. It sucks that this opportunity has come up at this time, but I really can't see how she can ask him to move back to the south for her. I think that too much has been done now and she needs to let Edward have his turn at work. But, who knows, maybe the house is a lemon and he will hate his job and beg Bella to move back to the south. It will definitely be interesting. I'm curious to see how Edward handles the news. I'd really like to see that from his POV.
Great chapter! Thanks for the update. And, I'm really sorry about the copycat. I usually read this on ffnet, but if that's what's going to happen, no biggie for me to switch sites. I really appreciate your vision as an author. I just don't understand some people. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and this wonderful story to complete strangers! I'm grateful.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
wonderful chapter, very light and entertaining, like you said, it was much needed after all the stress and angst of the last few chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially when Edward makes it to seattle.
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
This was an excellent chapter. A couple of new twists have been brought to the story. They should be fun to read and figure out. I'm so glad James has been down-graded. He was getting on my nerves.
I'm seeing this couple making their way down south soon. Who in their right mind wouldn't want to live in the south? The way you present makes me think you are a east coast southerner. I am a Gulf girl myself. We'd be happy for Edward to settle his family here. Carry on.-TheHarper
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I read your whole story today and have really enjoyed it. I can't wait to see how things work out!! I love southern Edward!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Wow...just wow...you are really surprising me...very nice. I normal follow plot lines to a tee in my mind. I really love this story... but I do think they should move back south lol. Maybe that is wishful thinking for myself though.
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