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Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Wow, well I certainly didn't see that coming but I'm SO glad they're both okay! Glad to know that you're only half-evil as well. lol. Damn, everything was going so well... too well. And now I can't help but think that Jame's is going to screw Bella over because she left so suddenly! O.o Anyway, great chapter!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
LOL, so glad things didn't get even worse for them! And I'm especially glad that Bella's not being distant anymore! >.< Can't wait for them to be in the same time zone again, lol. I hope Edward does get that job but I'm not going to hold my breath yet.... as for James, something's deffinetly going on with him. I wonder if he's trying to get Bela fired. Hmmmm.... Anyway, great chapter!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Wow, he really doesn't! I hope Bella doesn't hear about this! I hope Jasper keeps his mouth shut this time. He seems to be the one causing all the problems. lol. But I am so glad that they didn't leave on bad terms... even if Bella is growing distant. *is worried* Anyway, great chapter! I would say that I can't wait to know what happens next but I have a feeling it's not going to be particularly good, what with Edward meeting his ex and all.
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Damn it! I knew it was going too well to be true! Instead of Edward giving Bella whiplash, I think it's the other way around this time. She's not being fair on Edward but I understand why she's closed off. And Edward really shouldn't have given her an ultimatum like that! *sighs* Anyway, great chapter! I hope evrything works out.
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Awww that was so sweet! But I'm inclined to agree with them, things do seem to be going awfully well, almost too well. But hey, if that just me, then that's fune, It's nice to read them being so happy as well! :) I wonder what happens if Edward doesn't get the job though.... hmmm.... Anyway, great chapter!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
awwww. i've been reading your story all day...finally reached the end (insert sad smiley face) ...looking forward to next update, your Jasper and EDward are lovely. Bellas been a bit cold - not without reason given the history - but she's warming up now... thankyou its an awesome story. Bit more Bella guitar playing would go down well. Maybe a duet with Edward on keyboards?!
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I am a long time reader, and I have to tell you that I just adore this story. I love the raw and naked emotions you hae let them feel. You have used fantastic plot points, and most of them are oh-so-very-original! I have really enjoyed this fic and can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
It's now 2:50AM and I have got to get to bed and some sleep. I kept saying to myself, 'one more chapter' because I couldn't wait to see what happens between Bella and Edward. They seem so right for each other! But now I can't read anymore so it'll have to wait until tomorrow morning. You are a wonderful writer and I'm glad things are moving along at a good clip, that's the way I like it. hehe. Thank you.
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Uh oh... i can see this going both ways. they meet and he gets lots of really good advice and is able to break thru to bella. or.... they meet, someone sees or some other misunderstanding happens and all hell breaks loose! i'm really hoping for option one... please?
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Woo Hoo!!! Go Edward!!! I was hoping he'd eventually meet Sam and give him an ass whoopin!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
DAMN THOSE ANGSTY MONKEY WRENCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Bella's gonna lose him if she doesn't wake up...
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
ooohhh!!! i'm so happy for them!!! please tell me there isn't some big angsty wrench waiting to be thrown in to ruin their perfect world!
Reviewer: addict2twilight (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Trust that Bruce would offer that after Edward has moved to Seattle, what will Bella do? I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see what Jazz is hiding from Alice.
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I'm so sorry to hear that someone is stealing your story! It's so sad when people feel the need to pass themselves off as something they're not.
The chapter is great and I can't wait to see what Jasper is hiding from Edward!
Reviewer: susanrb45 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Love it!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Oh! I want someone to be that head over heels for me that fast!!!! I hope he gets that position in Seattle and then something happens where he has to live with bella and she gets in just as deep!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Ooh! Edward the hero! I like it!!
Reviewer: robsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
What a great story! I'm glad I found it!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
Yeah, I like that they are letting go and just jumping in. Sometimes it doesn't work out and people get hurt, but sometimes, its all totally worth it and you're glad you didn't waste any time.
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
I like your view of the 'imprinting.' Yes, it has a place in SM's world, but not in the real one.
And I am just as frustrated as Bella! I totally feel her pain! Can't wait til Edward comes to save her :D
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
He's SO gonna follow her to Seattle, isn't he??? His architect idol does live there, doesn't he? Why not apply to work with him to do his branching out? And then he can full-on pursue Bella!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Ooh! I'm LOVING this story! I wish I could meet someone and have it all be that instant and intense. And yes, I'm dying to find out what Emmett's gonna do!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
OMG i hadn't thoought of that question!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
OK maybe Bella doesn't approve of Caveward, but I think he's great.
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