Great chapter... I didn't even think to look on here for the rest of the story.  I'm so glad you're continuing it.  And I'm sorry that your story got stolen.

Love love love that Edward's there.  Now, it sucks though because she could have moved to the South and been with everyone...

You always keep me guessing.

Great chapter... I didn't even think to look on here for the rest of the story.  I'm so glad you're continuing it.  And I'm sorry that your story got stolen.

Love love love that Edward's there.  Now, it sucks though because she could have moved to the South and been with everyone...

You always keep me guessing.

I found your story in the top 10 favorite stories yesterday and have only left my computer for minimal amounts of times. (Can't just let the kids starve now can I?) I just have to say that I am falling in love with your storyline and characters. There is definitely a reason you're in the "top ten's".

You're a terrific writer and you have a way of making the characters so real. I can't help but to feel excitement for Edward and Bella. I know there has to be ups and downs to their relationship but I am so loving the ups!!

I am also loving the Alice/Jasper and Emmett/Rosalie storylines.

I rated the story a 10 and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Update soon!!

I knew it.  James is a rat-bastard.  Bella will tell Bruce everything and JAMES should get fired!  Yeah!

I'm SO glad i was right!  That turned out better than I hoped!  However, I'm a little concerned about James...  Hmmm... maybe he's going to make it so Bella quits or loses her job and then goes down to HHI with Edward cuz he doesn't get the job in Seattle...  :)

i am very glad you didnt string that out i would of totally died!!!!!!!!!

wtm

Your sorry is awsome please please update soon!!!

As i said before, you make us really care about these people and it shouldn't come as a surprise when I say that I shed a few tears for Jasper and Alice as well as Bella and Edward. Great chapter. I had a feeling that something bad was going to happen when they went to Florida.

Uh oh, something tells me this isn't going to end well, in the short term anyway. But I have hope for them. Don't let me down. :/

this is going to be very exciting! (=

The reason I love this story so much is the way you take the time to develope each characters' story and avoid using them to just cut to the sex. That kind of writing really turns me off. How you write allows the reader to form a connection between the themselves and the characters. I'm not a writer and sometimes I have a difficult time finding the right way to express myself with the written word but I do know and appreciate good writing and character deveopement when I read it and you are very good.  I have become involved in their lives through you and all I can say is well done, I can't wait for more. :) Thank you. Oh, and by the way, I loved the lollypop analogy. ;)

LOL I absolutly LOVED Bella's slip of the tongue but you didnt give us much indication of what Edward thought of that. *sigh* Anyway, I hope things work out for Bella at the retraunt and that nothing else goes wrong with them but by what you've been saying, I have a funny feeling that it just might. Anyway, great chapter!