Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
hmmm, I love this Bella, and I certainly look forward to further adventures of James and the dumpster AND of two tattoo'd boys!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Great chapter!
I have a feeling that things are going to get tense between Bella and Edward. It's just from what Emmett said and Bella's habits to fo to sleep. Just a small feeling.
I loved Bella telling James off! It was awesome!!
Please update soon?
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Great chapter yet again. Emmett is so funny, and I loved it when he asked Edward if he was one of those guys that had women figured out. I also would love for you to write an outtake of Edward and Jasper little adventure. I can only imagine Jasper calling Eme and asking her for the image of the family crest. I'm sure that whole night is effing hilarious. I'll be waiting for you next update.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Okay, Sam's an ass. Glad Edward hit him. But what's Bella going to think?
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
When you go to the zoo, your ma reminds you "not to poke the bears, or they will be cranky".......methinks Bella might have just poked Janes once too many times......
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
Ahhh, she said he's her boyfriend. Now if they could acknowlege their emotional attachment, maybe they could make this work!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Wow. I seem to start a lot of these reviews that way. Poor Bella. She must feel like she's being forced into something terrible. Well, not terrible. Uncomfortable, perhaps. *sigh*
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
I figured that'd be why you chose Sam. Damn, it ended up being worse than I thought. What the hell was he thinking? Oy. Men. Maybe Edward could call her, say he misses her, try to make things better. Hmmm?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Oh gosh. I keep telling myself that if Alice and Jasper can make it work, so can Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Oh. My. God! How embarassing! And poor Bella about Sam. Was he planning on marrying them both? I hope Edward wasn't turned off by that, it's hardly her fault.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Guh! So...close.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
so sweet!
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Aghhhh i'm totally loving it. I can't wait for the next chapter, well done.
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Aghhhh i'm totally loving it. I can't wait for the next chapter, well done.
Reviewer: Edwardsgrl78 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Oh so try I lived in pa and had a boyfriend in NY and then he moved to MASS it sucked but everytime we met the sex was mind blowing and great and you know all that good stuff. Even met half way a couple times and made it in the car which yes is very hard and yes also hard to find a secluded place in an area niether of you know!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Guh, I hate sun poisoning. Poor Bella. Though if Edward is making her all better...
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Oh god, Edward, open mouth, insert foot. *rolls eyes*
Reviewer: Edwardsgrl78 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
I'm nervous that is what I what I am!! Yikes I know they will get back to gether I know it! But at the same tie how? what is he going to do ?? hmm that is the question and I just read on to find out!!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
This is really good so far. I'm glad I stumbled upon it.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Wow. Awkward, yet hot. Damn. hehe
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Please, please, please sugar, hurry up I cant stand it write, write, write. I hate waiting. LOL great job great story amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: 4Eva (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Sweet!
Reviewer: 4Eva (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Ahhhhh! Soooooooo gooooooddddd!!!
Reviewer: Uncoordinated Princess (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Wonderful story amazing idea looking forward to more of your wonderful work. Happy Edward and Jasper are fine. What Jasper is hiding is eating at me a little but I know whatever it is Alice and he can move pass it or towards it so looking forward to that. Update when you can and hope to read it soon.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
LOVE THIS STORY CAN'T GET ENOUGH! Happy Jaz and Edward are fine that scared me. Love how Edward and Bella are together for good. Waiting Jaz's sercert that's going to be great. Looking forward to more update when you can.
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