Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I don't know why, but I feel like Edward is walking on eggshells right now! One wrong move and Bella is going to flip out and think that things aren't as good as they seem!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Squee you better tell us when the out take is up!!!!
I loved this chapter and I loved the more authoritative command asserting Bella. BOTH in the bedroom and in the kitchen!!!
This was a wonderful well awaited chapter!! Loved it thanks for the update it was needed! I always enjoy a good read after a long hard day especially one like this muah hahaha
If you get some free time check out my story Test of Fate and let me know what you think!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
I've never understood all the Bella hating. Seems like it's across the board, half the fics out there, ppl hate (or at least have negative feelings towards) Bella. *sigh* Will we at least get the Skype sex?
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Giddy Up! Go Bella! I like the morning games...maybe she can get him to beg next time;) I think I'd rather enjoy a begging Edward!
I hate james....so good job on that character. Ohhhh and thanks for giving Emmett a back bone! So many stories I read have him being Rose's bitch and it just annoys me, so thanks again for giving these guys some self respect! Love the story!
Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
oo they got tatoos i think they are so hot wonder when Bella is going to get the guts to tell Edward she has been offered a job interstate.
keep up the excellent work
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Edward, Edward, Edward. I love you honey, but you're an idiot.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Oh god. I knew something had to go wrong. I hope they work through it!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
can't wait for more
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
James is a ticking time bomb. I love Edward.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Poor Bella, who doesn't like change, is having her life thrown up in pieces all around her.
Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
The tattoo was funny. I liked the reveal and Jasper's reaction. Oh, and I love tattoos. Love em love em love em.
The first night together at home was super sweet and the first morning super hot.
Curious where things are going plotwise and how much is left to the story. Is there a big crazy ex in Edward's closet too that I don't remember or that we haven't heard about? And what's up with James and Bruce asking Bella to move?
Still enjoying the story.
Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Haha! James is a bitch.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
So THAT's what it is! They both got Tattoos!....very veryy veryyy HOT ;)
Man Edward got him a nice wake up call in the morning, and I LOVE that Bella likes a challenge :D Man Bella is One lucky girl, Edward sleeps in the nude? *thud* and I love how he held onto her to make sure she didn't fall ;)
James is an Ass as usual and he needs to take a hike ;)
GREAT chap!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
"Women get very possessive over their men’s asses" *snorts* That line made my whole night. HA!! And I can't wait for the outtake!!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
When I was checking my favorite stories I stopped at yours and said to the hubby whats todays date? I swear I squeled. Yay!!! I love this story Oh and I will be keeping my eye out, wish I knew how to get notified......great job
Reviewer: bloomingdale (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
uhoh. james scares meeeee
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
James is starting to scare me :(
Love their morning challenge -- yee-haw!!!
The out-take sounds fun :)
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
James is starting to scare me :(
Love their morning challenge -- yee-haw!!!
The out-take sounds fun :)
Reviewer: elisena (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
i really like this story!!! and i can't wait for more! :)
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
All that talk about women mothering their men made me wonder for a minute if you aren't a man yourself. That was just too dead on. : ) (I mean that as a compliment)
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Okay, just so you know, you said her parent's names were Rene and Phil a few chapters back. Don't know if you want to go fix that. I noticed the condom thing, but I just assumed Bella was on the pill.
So, Edward loves Bella. And he's already (abstractly) thinking of proposing. Wow. Does that boy move fast.
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Loved this chapter, amazing! (:
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Sooooo, who's in Edward's past, and what happened there?
Reviewer: susanrb45 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Oh I like the tattoo outtake idea. Great chapter
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I'm sensing that the fact that Bella keeps turning her back on James is going to be a huge personal mistake. Guessing he's deluded enough to think if he removes her physically then Bruce will see how stellar he really is (typical control guy move, eh?). What ever you do, I know from what you've done so far, that I'll love it!
Nice, wakey, wakey scene!!! ;D I'll definitly keep my eyes peeled for the outtake! Sounds like a hoot and a half in the making!
Thanks for writing!
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