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Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I really don't like James. Bella and Edward need to move South so they can be near Alice and Jasper. Update soon!
Reviewer: eifeltwr (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: rgvdoll (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
This chapter was amazing!. I am wanting me some "southern lovin!" sighs!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I am so glad that even in their drunken state (which honestly no tattoo shop with ink you drunk) they realized how it would look with each other's names on their backs. That was my first thought when he said it.
I'm glad she's finally sticking up for herself against James. She needs to talk honestly with Edward about the promotion opportunity or completely dismiss the idea. But if it's on her mind at all, she needs to talk to him. Shitty timing though.
Reviewer: hkimberly1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
loves it!!!!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Love it! I always look forward to your updated and can't wait for the next one! :)
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
great part
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
for a second there i got mortified that edward and jasper had each other's names on their backs!! HAHA.. i LMAO.. but then i read that they didn't end up doing it.. hehe.. it would have been a good laugh but i guess bella and alice would both kill them for doing it. hehe...i like edward and emmett's talk and in a way emmett made sense but i guess that won't be a problem with edward. but this isn't to say that they won't have problems and setbacks. i'm sure they will just like any couple. and i am so glad that bella already had that talk with james. she needs to show him who's the boss. =)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
for a second there i got mortified that edward and jasper had each other's names on their backs!! HAHA.. i LMAO.. but then i read that they didn't end up doing it.. hehe.. it would have been a good laugh but i guess bella and alice would both kill them for doing it. hehe...i like edward and emmett's talk and in a way emmett made sense but i guess that won't be a problem with edward. but this isn't to say that they won't have problems and setbacks. i'm sure they will just like any couple. and i am so glad that bella already had that talk with james. she needs to show him who's the boss. =)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
for a second there i got mortified that edward and jasper had each other's names on their backs!! HAHA.. i LMAO.. but then i read that they didn't end up doing it.. hehe.. it would have been a good laugh but i guess bella and alice would both kill them for doing it. hehe...i like edward and emmett's talk and in a way emmett made sense but i guess that won't be a problem with edward. but this isn't to say that they won't have problems and setbacks. i'm sure they will just like any couple. and i am so glad that bella already had that talk with james. she needs to show him who's the boss. =)
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Well, my last two reviews were lost, let's see if this one holds up.
First, you called Garrett Tony a few chapters back.
God, James is a douch. Edward's tat is hot. And I hope they get on their feet soon and figure out what they're going to do.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I bet the outtake will be hilarious, everyone always loves drunkward lol
Loving the story, I get so excited when I see it update :)
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
My review for the last chapt, since I couldn't submit it:
Oy. They never seem to have enough time together, do they? And, you called Garrett Tony in Esme's chapt, I believe.
Ahhhh, he's home at last. *sigh* But will Bella decide it's best for all of them if they go back to SC?
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Uh oh.
I'm pretty worried about this James shit now--As was, no doubt, your evil intention. But you've always been so gentle with us, Paige, that I have to believe that I'll live through this latest trial reasonably unscathed.
I'm so glad that you're continuing this story here on Twilighted. It's where I first discovered you and it just feels like coming home to return here to read your stories.
The wake-up lemon was very nice indeed. Delicious as always. Girl, You never let me down. Mmmmnnnn-good. And I have a feeling that a proper-bed shopping trip may be featured in their near future.
Manymanymany thanks (though I can never thank you enough) for writing!
Smooches,
R
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Uh oh.
I'm pretty worried about this James shit now--As was, no doubt, your evil intention. But you've always been so gentle with us, Paige, that I have to believe that I'll live through this latest trial reasonably unscathed.
I'm so glad that you're continuing this story here on Twilighted. It's where I first discovered you and it just feels like coming home to return here to read your stories.
The wake-up lemon was very nice indeed. Delicious as always. Girl, You never let me down. Mmmmnnnn-good. And I have a feeling that a proper-bed shopping trip may be featured in their near future.
Manymanymany thanks (though I can never thank you enough) for writing!
Smooches,
R
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Uh oh.
I'm pretty worried about this James shit now--As was, no doubt, your evil intention. But you've always been so gentle with us, Paige, that I have to believe that I'll live through this latest trial reasonably unscathed.
I'm so glad that you're continuing this story here on Twilighted. It's where I first discovered you and it just feels like coming home to return here to read your stories.
The wake-up lemon was very nice indeed. Delicious as always. Girl, You never let me down. Mmmmnnnn-good. And I have a feeling that a proper-bed shopping trip may be featured in their near future.
Manymanymany thanks (though I can never thank you enough) for writing!
Smooches,
R
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Oy. They never seem to have enough time together, do they?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Oy. They never seem to have enough time together, do they?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Oy. They never seem to have enough time together, do they?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew it! I knew it! James is an ass.
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I hope they don't end up struggling too much in the adjustment period that emmett is concerned about (as they did launch right into things), I would definitely love adjusting to that life! I hope everything works out with bella's career, especially if whatever happens allows things to along help with her relationship with edward!!! ;)
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
*gasp* Please let them be okay. And please don't let this affect her job. I don't trust James. Leave it to him to "forget" to mention she called.
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
off to post ont he forum!!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Oh if I was her I would watch James like a hawk because he is definitely up to no good.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
go bella go bella
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