Reviewer: smudger1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Another cracking chapter.....I could used to your Edward with a Southern accent!
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
ooowwww...... this is only chapter one and already you got me wanting more.....lol
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Thank you.
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Thank you.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
James just won't quit will he? Bastard. Great chapter. I tremble with the foreshadowing of B&E trouble in the near future ...
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
So glad Bella put James in his place. I don't think he's going to leave it there though. His action of smashing the crate leads me to believe he will try almost anything to get his way. I hope Bruce fires his ass.
The adjustment that happens when any two people begin to live together is just that- an adjustment. No doubt things may get a little sticky, but somehow I get the feeling that the love which exists between Edward and Bella will get them through it.
Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Good chapter. I am looking forward to Edward starting his new job. I have a feeling it is going to create a bit of stress and drama. I am excited about all the lemons now that these two are finally back together. Can't. Wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Great chapter! I love OCD Bella!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
awwwwwww!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Way to go Bella, Ive delt with prep cooks like that alot.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
for a second there i got mortified that edward and jasper had each other's names on their backs!! HAHA.. i LMAO.. but then i read that they didn't end up doing it.. hehe.. it would have been a good laugh but i guess bella and alice would both kill them for doing it. hehe...i like edward and emmett's talk and in a way emmett made sense but i guess that won't be a problem with edward. but this isn't to say that they won't have problems and setbacks. i'm sure they will just like any couple. and i am so glad that bella already had that talk with james. she needs to show him who's the boss. =)
Reviewer: EmpressOperaDiva (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Awww... That was short and sweet. I am scared to see what is going to happen between Bella and Edward though... Moving in with each other was a big step... And Bella already said she would marry him if he asked... I know it's soon.... But I don't know why I feel trouble rising on the horizon. This was a great chapter and I can't wait for more!
All my best,
Michelle
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
i loved this chapter. Can't wait for the teasing when they get to the kitchen.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
thanks for the update!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
aaaaaahhhhhhaaaaaaa serves the little slimy bastard right!!!!!! GO Bella!
I really like how her and Edward are finding things out about themselves.
He is a typical guy...I have to remind my husband to brush his damn teeth all the damn time!!!!!!
Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Whoooo hooo..the waggling fingers at the end: Priceless!!! And I'm hooked :D
Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
I don't care about them not having sex...this chapter was amazingist!!! (and that's my own word too lol) I love it :D
Reviewer: miss_alice (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Aww man I can't belive you left us hanging about the whole tattoo story. Can't wait to read the side story. BTW loving this story!! Can James please have an accident while chopping some onions or something?
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Oh......James is PISSED!!HA!! ;D Awsome chapter..
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
James is gonna do something evil....I know it! But I love the way Bella stands up to him...
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
awsome, wondering what bella will tell edward about bruce's offer, update soon pls
Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Hmm...So I feel like very soon there is going to be a blow up between James and Bella and I feel like there's also something steadily brewing between Bella and Edward. When is she going to tell him about Bruce's offer? It will definitely be interesting to see how these two adapt to living together and Edward living in a new city. I really think something's coming, but nothing that they can't work out. Hmm...
Thanks for another great chapter! I love to see this update in my inbox, it always makes me smile. And I'm so gald you decided to keep the tattoo. I love that Alice asked if Jaz was in the bedroom with Bella and Edward. That whole scene had me cracking up. Thanks again! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
The tattoo part was hysterical and I loved it! I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Edward and Jasper got tattoos, that is HOT!
An angry James doesn't sound very good! Can't wait to see what he does.
What a wake up call for Eddie! I'm sure he was super excited about that one. LOL :)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I loved the crazy ex-girlfriend story about Lauren, and I'm looking forward to the outtake of the tattoo parlor episode. Good for Bella, putting James in his place a the end there.
xoxo Sarah
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