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Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

great chapter!! looking forward to the next!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Oh, I want that outtake. That whole thing was hilarious just what I read here, as was the info about Emmett's tattoo. But I was kinda flabbergasted that that was Jasper's big secret he was keeping from Alice. I was like. "that's all?" Lol. Poor guy. I loved that they were going to get each other's names though, too cute. I love bromances!

Call me sadistic, but I was kinda looking forward to some knock down, drag out Emmett vs. Rosalie fighting. Lol. Although I'm sure the situation would probably have quickly become uncomfortable for everyone else, so I'm sure Edward interceding was for the best.

Moving on to my own pessimism (or as I prefer to think of it, realism) I sense Eddie and Bells still haven't crossed all of the hurdles they need to in their relationship. I'm definitely looking for some big drama coming their way, again. Realistic and juicy, but still somewhat depressing, lol.

LOVED Bella putting James in his place. I was all like, "Ha, take that bioytch!"   And yes, I have been up all night, lol.

Thanks for another wonderful chapter! Looking forward to more!  

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Who the hell is screaming like that? Oh. ...Needless to say I went off to work with a smile on my face and a song in my heart.

 

Oh holy hell, yes.  and i look forward to the tat outtake....

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Reviewer: Edwardsgrl78 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

O My I've couaght up with you and now the pain is going to be waiting for more Yikes hopefully you don't take too long!!  Jenn

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Hehe, loved it!  Especially Bella giving James the verbal smack-down.  Something tells me he's not just gonna give in, though...but I think she can take him ;-)  Looking forward to reading the next chapter, as well as the tattoo outtake!

Reviewer: cbrand1996 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Thanks for the chapter! I really love this story, but somehow it seems that those two aren't communicating and are assuming too much. So I will be eagerly waiting for another chapter. I still don't understand how Twilighted works... I never got a notice regarding your update even though I have you both in my fave authors and fave story...

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

another wonderful chapter, as well written and entertaining as always. I just love it when the gang is all together, almost as much as I love Edward and Bella's alone time. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I am looking forward to the tattoo outtake, as I am sure it will be highly entertaining.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

This James has the nerve!! Who the fuck he thinks he is??? I will tell you what he is not: clever!

He seemed to be quite unstable and I think very soon he is going to snap! Ain't gonna be pretty! He seems to be the "I am either going to have you or fuck you royally" type, and by fuck I don't mean the good way...

Anyway, Edward thinks he understands women and he completely misunderstood Bella's reactions to weddings! Maybe he gets better other women, not his own! :D

Bella so want to marry him! I think she has already taken such a commitment, what with  buying a house with him and all that the biggest and scariest step was already taken. Marrying is just part of the package.

But then again, Edward is not a mind reader (haha! that was lame) and Bella is the master of multiple signals!

But what is FF if we don't have a bit of drama, right?

I am enjoying every minute/word? of it. Thanks for the update!

 

PS- the tatoo parlor story was very funny! I gasped when he mentioned the intension was tattoing each others' names! hahaha Please can't wait for this outtake! Edward and Jasper drunk is going to be priceless!!

Reviewer: Edwardsgrl78 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

ooo i knew it i knew that James he had to be a bad guy O course right!? 

Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide

James is an ass...hmph..I knew he was up to NO good....idiot....good chappy :D

Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

OMG girlll I nearly died!! NEVER DO THAT AGAIN!!! *sniff* Got me with tears and all...Alice can't deal with that drama on top of her asshole parents...good chapter, had me at the edge of my seat and glued to the pc....lol

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

L-O-V-E-D, loved it!!!!  This was so great to come home to.  Can't wait for the outtake and the next chapter!  See you on the thread!!!

Manda

Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Loved it! I was sooooo ready for an update, and this was just like a glass of sweet tea on a hot day :) Emmett's tattoo - priceless!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

loved it! so what is emmets tat?

Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Curious about the outtake...nervous as hell about unstable James.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Great chapter! I loved their group together. It is cute that they still have awkward couple moments. I think that lends credibility to the short amount of time they have been together. I loved Bella putting James in his place, but I am all for shipping him out! I think it will take Bruce putting him in his place as well or firing him to actually get him to stop being a prick!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Great chapter!  Loved the wake up!  Oh and is James going to cause trouble for our happy couple because I feel like he is spinning out of control and anything is possible with him!  Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Great chapter!  Loved the wake up!  Oh and is James going to cause trouble for our happy couple because I feel like he is spinning out of control and anything is possible with him!  Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

You've turned me into a zombie...staying up late to read this wonderful expression of creativity...*trudges off to bed* *yawn* Good stuff chica...good stuff :)

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

rofl!  i was like"oh wow this is seriously happening again?! what is with him and always being naked" lol i literally said "ohhhhhhh" when he snapped out of it lol. i'm really liking this story. can't wait to see what's in store next.

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Um well I see that taking away the key woudl be a great idea.

LOL to the morning hello to not only Edward but I guess Bella went to work with a smile and a spring in her step.

Well that can't be good if she has pissed old James off. I wonder if that will come back to bite her later. I hope not she's the boss when Bruce is away.

Update soon.

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

hmmm is James going to do something sinister? I hope so then Edward can kick his ass!!

Reviewer: dreamcatcher1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

I dont know what it is but when i finished reading the first and second chapter i had a deja vous moment like like i seen it before. but i love this story regardless

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

Morning sex just makes your day go so much better and Bella got the added pleasure of putting James in his place.

Southern, drunken boys getting tattoos was to good to pass on I'm glad your writting an outtake. Please include the phone call to Esme.

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