Reviewer: MNLady55 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
My birthday is May 15th...I love that Alice and Jasper are getting married that day! Good story so far!
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
Yeah Sam's a total ass & Bella's totally correct, if he had ANY sence of decency he should have told her first thing as soon as he realised there was an attraction. And how humiliating for Bella to find out like that...at work infront of everyone.
I guess it's not like Edward can jump on the next plane & visit her, but I do hope there is some communication or something before the end of the month. Now I really really want to go & read the next ch. but unfortunaly real life is screaming for me
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
I loved this chapter, lol & yes sex on the beach with the sand...um yah *grin*. I'm glad they got to have some before she has to leave BUT if Emmett finds out he'll flip. Also she's probably going to over analize it & start freaking out too *sigh*
Reviewer: ThisTimeImperfect3 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
ugh...is there a Tanya in this closet??
Reviewer: ThisTimeImperfect3 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
"....I made the mistake of looking down at him, only to see him grinning evilly up at me..."
The visual is KILLING me...in a totally good, welcome way :)
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Good chapter. I'm so glad I found this story; I was so upset when it was no longer on FF, but at least I was able to find it here; I've liked this story from the beginning and am glad that I am able to continue with it to see how it progresses.
I'm so glad that Edward and Bella are together and in their own place now. Having him be across the country was just not working. I just hope that James doesn't go off on Bella or something. He was kind of freaky at the end there smashing up that wooden crate. It seems that he needs a little anger management, if you ask me.
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Nice start. I feel badly for Bella. She's been hurt so badly and now she thinks that she's being rejected by this beautiful man who was making her feeling so good.
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Yikes Emmett is gonna FLIP out. Yeah when you're that burnt anything that touches you hurts. Glad they had some fun there. Jaz & Alice are pretty sneaky *grin*
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Lol I can't believe Jake showed her around the golf course (how mindnumbingly boring is that. Hmm I hope the others all go out except for Edward & Bella
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Oooooooooo Come on Edward you need to fight harder for her .*grin* that was slightly akward, It was nice of Bella to defend Edward's sleeping arangment. *yawn* it's 4am so I'm probably not making much sense, but want to carry on reading more
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Oh dear, things are really gonna get complicated huh. Loved Edwards POV though!
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Hey sounds great, I'm already hooked. Hey I'm totally compitant on fanfiction but Twilighted seems kinda complicated so if I do something wrong just let me know. Jasper sounds like a total sweetheart. Gosh can you imagine waking up to that & then having to face each other the next day...akward
Reviewer: hln3twimom (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Nice where do I go to find this kind of vacation roommates lol
Reviewer: possession (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Enjoying the story. I'm on pins and needles!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Whew! I'm glad they worked things out as best they could. For now. How do I know Bella's going to find out out this non-date and maybe freak out?
Reviewer: elw (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
I love love love the way he calls her "Sugar" - I'm swooning!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
I just love FirstLoveWard. Very sweet.
Reviewer: elw (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
So so good. Enjoying this story.
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Whoo hooo!! I fucking love this story!
Reviewer: LisiLisi1990 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
okay.. no offense but bella is kinda annoying
Reviewer: ThisTimeImperfect3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
it's almost refreshing to see someone other than Jacob be the asshat for a change....
Reviewer: ThisTimeImperfect3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
This chapter makes me wish my momma had a sweet southern accent...
...waiting for the oncoming heartfail....
Reviewer: maebee (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Nice. I looked you up after reading the rec on PPSS. Hope to see updates soon!
Cheers!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
I'm loving this story so far. I never see Sam in ff so its nice that he's here, even if he's an ass.
Reviewer: ThisTimeImperfect3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Edward can slap my granny anyday...errr...you know what I mean...
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