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Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
love it!
Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
can't wait to see what happens
Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
AWESOME!
Reviewer: pickeljuice (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Awesome story. Amazing "Lemons" Please don't keep us waiting long for the next update. It's driving me crazy to know what their future holds!
Reviewer: tyle w (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
this was really funny !
Reviewer: SC Mom (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
I just also had to say that my brother's kids used to go to school with Tyler Florence's kid(s) (I don't know how many he has). He cooked for some school event that they went to.
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
LOL awesome chapter. Can you imagine if Edward & Jasper had got each others names, I so cracked up laughing at them & their "Demon Scotch & Brotherhood" be great if you do an outtake. Hmm I don't think things are going to be half as rosy as Edward thinks, plus he needs to talk to Bells about where their relationship is headed, cos she told Esme she wasn't because he hadn't asked. But he's not asking because he thinks it will freak her out (& I guess cos it's to soon which I guess it could be). Oh yah & she needs to tell him about her job offer. Looking forward to the next chapter (oh btw I'm not telling you how I think you should write it, you're doing an AWESOME job, I'm just thinking out loud :)
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Phew I thought from yr AN at the end of the last chapter that this was gonna be a hard one to read, very angsty. But the only thing I'm concerned about is that Bella has been offered this job & to be honest I guess it is a really good oppurtunity for Edward to work at the firm in seatle, but I just don't have a good feeling about it. It would be so much better if Bella moves.Argg I don't know what they should do. Hmm life is never simple huh
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
AWWW He said Alice should be planning their wedding too, thats so sweet. I loved the toast at the end too, that was lovely!
Ok now I'm ready to buckle up for the oncoming angst *gulp*
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Hmm James does suck! Sha Edward must have been so tired & scared, fighting the water like that, trying to keep Jazz up. They both are lucky they made it out alive. Though I think they're both gonna be in a bit of pain for a while. It was quite nice having Esme's POV,
Loving the story :)
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
LOL THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT BEING TRULY EVIL. Yikes I was already freaking out when Bella got the call. I honestly thought one of them might die (I tend to have very fast pessimistic reactions to things *grin*)
Hmm I don't know if it's a good thing Edward going to work for that company, I don't know maybe because he's a guy he can handle the pressure & lack of comunicative skills that that asshole is already showing.
I'm trying to work out if James is after Bella for sex or only her job, & what's with her boss, is he into her too.
Well anyway I'm glad the boys are ok
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Oh PHEW, lol that was so much more positive than I was expecting. Wow it even had Bella saying ILY. Thanks for that. Oooo I can't believe if Edward gets the job they're going to move in together Woo Hoo
Reviewer: moxieandmirth (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Trying to decide on my favorite line from this extremely funny chapter:
1. "I like you, Edward. You’re polite and you crack like an egg"
or
2. "He’s like a jerk whisperer."
or
3. your A/N about a lot of bones.
I think Renee wins this one. I've got to remember that line.
I really should be sleeping.
Reviewer: moxieandmirth (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
I'd have hit him too. Yay Edward. Bella better be happy, not prideful. On to the next chapter to find out. (PS, I should be sleeping right now...)
Reviewer: moxieandmirth (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
LMAO! Love the end of that chapter. You've got me completely sucked in. You'd think I'd be tired of falling for Edward by now, but stories like this... well who can blame me, really?
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Lol what a dumb ass. Shit this is so gonna backfire in a BIG way *sigh* & what's with Cirsty agreeing to it. Argg Bellas gonna die if she finds out...for petes sake there are a dozen other ppl he could talk to.
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Bella's an idiot. I know what Sam did to her would mess with her for life, but instead of letting it affect ALL future relationships, maybe she should try going for therapy to work through her insecurities. Poor Edward
Reviewer: ThisTimeImperfect3 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
(sigh)...why must there always be the heartfail?
Reviewer: VampinGina (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Heh- reminds me of my Honeymoon..sunburn and all!
Reviewer: VampinGina (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Heh- reminds me of my Honeymoon..sunburn and all!
Reviewer: SC Mom (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
I'm really loving this story. I am from South Carolina, born and raised, so this story is near and dear to my heart. I love southern men, so a southern Jasper AND Edward is almost too much ;) I live right down the street from a Piggly Wiggly, and my son giggles hysterically whenever I say we're going there. Thanks for writing this beautiful story. It is very well written and extremely entertaining.
Reviewer: ColdDeadSparkly (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Awesome story! I love your plot and your characters and everything (: Southern Edward is so hot! Please update soon (:
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Wow thats one hang of a cliffhanger to leave us with. Seriously Bella needs to get a restraining order on Sam...what an ass. Glad Edward decked him, hope Bellas not pissed off with him.
I liked when they woke up in the morning & she was wrapped around him, seems a good sign & now they have a few days together YAY
Hmm if Edward does get this job it sounds like there will be a TON of pressure & I'm not sure that's a good thing
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
Aww loved the chapter. I would be so frustrated if I was Edward & Bella kept throwing me all these mixed signals, then disappeared straight after sex every time. I honestly have no problem with Edward being a bit jealous (just keepin an eye on her, making sure others know she's his). However his comment about the guys working well for her because she's a woman did not come across well, He did sound slightly chauvinistic, don't know if he meant it like that though.
I LOVED Alice & Jaspers painting, what a neat (if slightly messy) idea *grin*
Reviewer: bouncy72 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Hahaha that is an awful way to wake up.That was such a realistic dream (although I did think it was a bit weird of Bella, especially like that).
You gotta love Alice (truly it would piss me off to no end if my friends did that, but it so fits the story) & these 2 would never get anywhere without a push. Hmm I wonder if Edward will be approached with a job offer while he's here...that would be great!!
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