Reviewer: dazzledinNY (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
i loved everything about this chapter!
Reviewer: dazzledinNY (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
i loved everything about this chapter!
Reviewer: meadow11 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
great story! i just recently found this story and i couldn't stop reading! and now i can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: cindrella (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I m totally in love with ur story!!!Ur writing is simply amazing...outstanding!!!I just cant wait for ur next update.The way u potrayed edward's emotions and love for bella is out of the world.Pleaseeeee do update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: jessarae (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
I don't think they went too fast. When you can't help it, you just have to. I think your doing a great job with this story. I hope Bella warms up soon and realizes that this is not just a fling.
Reviewer: jessarae (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
I am loving how the girls as so into her sex life......it's so real!! You know us girls....always gossipin' ;)
Can't wait to see what happens!!
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Oh now... what is up with this Christy chick? Hum.... I hope she does help and doesn't cause trouble.... And I keep going back to Bella and James in the cooler... one smell being dominant? humm... interesting!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Uh oh.... Edward gave an ultimatum and it doesn't sound like Bella liked that too much... not that I can blame her! I love how relatable your characters are! I am loving this one more and more! So glad I found it! Great work!!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: WitchBgood (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
hey, this is AgoodWITCH from ff...I finally found your story over here and I'm so glad to still be able to follow it...can't wait to see what's coming.
Reviewer: yogacat (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I'm sorry someone screwed with you on ff.
glad you're still here
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
hhaaa Game On JERK!
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
i'm lovin' this story! Never heard of sun poisoning before tho. Can't wait to read on.
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
great story! Can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: stormochroi (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Wherever this is set sounds gorgeous, I must google it to find some images.....Lovely chapter, sensitive Edward and a gorgeous Jasper...x
Reviewer: stormochroi (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Oh my god, I laughed out loud at the end of that!!!! Okay lets lay it on the line now, this story owns me.........I have sent my 4 year old son out for a drive with Daddy so I can read some more in peace... I'm the worst mother in the world but this story is soooooooooooo good...Love it...x
Reviewer: stormochroi (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Love EPOV ......... very hot!!Yummy....
Reviewer: stormochroi (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Love your writing, love the story, can't wait for the next chapters!
Reviewer: epwatts_85 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
im waxed and ready for whatever is next
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
i dig it
Reviewer: epwatts_85 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
loved the granny line...lmao
Reviewer: lvedward (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Oh my... YES, finally!!! Well done, Sam got what he deserved!
Reviewer: twixtream (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
i love your story . cant wait for the next chapter . your extreramly creative and a very good writer you really know how to keep a story interesting . so iam looking forward for more of your writing .
Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
very funny
Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
i love how alice and jasper are helping!
Reviewer: pennymoore09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
can't wait to hear what Em said
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