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Reviewer: ReluctantRomantic (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

This was so imaginative and lmfao funny! Great, great job.

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

That was Too Much Fun :D

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Nice to know what went through these two heads when they decided to have a tattoo. I just thought it would have been more pushed to the humor/comedy side because the story dod have a lot of potential to crack us up... but it is good anyway!

Thanks

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

lol, that was hilarious! I can't wait for more outtakes in the future. Now, let the drama begin lol. I know it's coming :)

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Okay, this chapter was hysterical.  I laughed.  Thank you.  You are so funny.  I thoroughly enjoyed it and thank you for making the outtake as a chapter.  Chompin at the bit for more.

Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Ahhh!  I absolutely loved this outtake!  I'm so glad you decided to write it.  i couldn't stop laughing.  And the reason you gave for them deciding to do something, why Jas was a little worried, about his abandonment issues, that was genius.  Ok, I have to tell you my favorite parts...

'We’re not gay, we’re just drunk.”

“It was Jasper’s idea, I’m just bein’ agreeable,”

“Does it really hurt that bad? Or are you just fucking with me?”

“I’ve had teenage girls in this chair getting their tramp stamps that bitched less than you,”

HAHAH!  LOVE IT!  I also loved that they rode their bikes like kids.  That killed me.  And that they keep bringing up that Jas almost died, even their mother is tired of it.  And them not thinking about Alice and Bella until it was over.  How does that even happen?!  Too funny!

Oh, and i can't wait for the jump!  I love jumps!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

loved it, very entertaining, but then drunken male bonding always is. I especially loved esmes reaction to the situation, and the boys convincing her to help them, I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us waiting to long for the next update/out take.

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

That was hilarious!!!!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Awesome!!!!

Reviewer: EllaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

So great. I absolutely love all things Jasper and being from the south, I have to say, I love your representation of our funny sayings and dialect without making it sound like all people from the south are ignorant rednecks. In other words. Good Job. Love it.

Reviewer: Siledubh (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

I loved this!  It was just hysterical.  Those southern boys (and southern mommas) are extremely entertaining.  I had a hard day and it was nice to just read this and have a good laugh.  Thanks!  I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Uncoordinated Princess (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Love this outake. I thought this was funny it seems our boys where sweating what their girls would think and then the girls and Emmett think it's cool even Alice wants one. My old science teacher Ms. Davey had a tramp stamp and everyone knew she was a partyer. Hopeing Edward hates his job to make it easier to move for Bella I just want things to workout. If James messes with Bella you know Edward, Emmett, Rose.and Alice is going to KICK HIS ASS! Looking forward to more please Update when you can.:}   

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

That was really fun, I loved it!  I think it's cool they got matching tattoos, that's really sweet, and Carlisle will be proud!

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

BROTHERHOOD!! LMAO!! Hey it's cute. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: wikiit (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

I literally squealed and clapped my hands when I saw the update.  I woke up my one yr old too.  Your story was rec'ed to me last week so I searched for it on fanfiction & I saw the note that your work had been plageurized(sp?) and that you weren't sure if you were going to finish it.  I debated with myself whether I should start a story that may not ever see a resolution, but now I am so glad I went ahead & took the chance.  Keep it up, don't let some floozie skank thief keep you from finishing your piece of art.  You have kept me guessing, which is all I ask for in fanfics.  Well, I also ask for medium angst, heavy on the lemons.  All in all, great fic.

Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood

lovin this

Reviewer: ainsleyhayes (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Sweet mother of fuck. This is the most hilarious thing I have read in a damn long time. The drunks were absolutely adorable, and Esme is absolutely fantastic. You know that Carlisle was just laughing in the background, praying that they went through with it.

Ah... excellent. Thank you so much for writing!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

LOL, loved the outtake!  Drunken southern gentlemen are quite entertaining.  Can't wait to see what the future holds!

Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

OMG, thank you, thank you for giving us that outtake.  It was priceless and perfect.  And those two southern boys with all their charm, drunk off their asses was perfect.

“It was Jasper’s idea, I’m just bein’ agreeable,” I said.

I can just hear him saying that.  And Esme, my goodness, I was cracking up.  I loved this!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

That was a nice surprise!  And being drunk while getting one, priceless.  Esme wanting to tan their hides was great.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming

love it

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You


Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

I loved it, the way esme acted was almost the same way my mother did when I got mine and then when I told her about my next one I am getting, just brought back funny memories. Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

loved this...you write a good drunk!!!

Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

Love it. I think the tats are cool.

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