Reviewer: smackers18 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
ahh everyone loves a tattooed Edward... and one that calls you sugar even better :-) Great chapter
Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
So I just finished reading this story a couple days ago. I would have reviewed every chapter, but that wasn't possible. But I've loved reading this story. It has comedy, drama, and romance. What more could you ask for? :)
I think in the comedy column, that the end of this chapter may have taken the cake with the 'girly little scream' Edward let out. Imagining it cracks me up.
I can't wait for more. :)
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
loved this! so funny!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Ok so this was actually really hysterical! I loved it!
Reviewer: Ruby Jean (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Great outtake. I'm glad that we got to see why they got the tattoo's...looking forward to seeing how Bella and Edward are adjusting.
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I couldn't resist based on the title alone! Great 1st chapter!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Cute chapter! :-)
Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
OMG that was so funny!! I have an eagle in that spot and it hurt like a son of a bitch! I however took the Jasper approch and stayed quiet and kept trying to breathe!
Reviewer: jadsmama (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
LOL this is a great out take. i could picture it all especially them riding their bikes around
Reviewer: jadsmama (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
LOL this is a great out take. i could picture it all especially them riding their bikes around
Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Tee-hee. That was funny. I liked the whiny phone call with mom in particular.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Great chapter! I love the boys getting drunk and getting tattoos. Classic!
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
great bonding between these two i am loving the story :)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
I love this outtake! Both Jasper and Edward are so believable as brothers- I swear you've got some brothers of your own. Too funny that Esme sent them the picture for their ink. I would have probably elected for the first option (I would tan my child's hide! Well, he's only eight...I might rethink that when he gets older).
Whatever James is doing, plotting, etc. I hope he gets caught and strung up by his hind quarters. He's such a creep...
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
God save us from drunk idiot brothers..lol
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
These two crack me up :)
Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
I can't wait. This story is so well written!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
How funny! I just logged on before work to get my fanfic fix...now I can laugh my ass off all the way to work. LOVED the outtake!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
hurry
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
can't wait for more....that shit was hilarious
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
great part
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
that was hilarious, edward being all girly & jasper freakin out about alice roll on next chapter please dont leave us hanging tooooooo long
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
While I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story, I absolutely loved getting to read this outtake. Drunk Edward and Drunk Jasper are now my offical favorite characters ever from NSiaSMB. They were soooo freaking awesome, I just wanted to grab and shot and join the party. And I looooved Esme on the phone, especially when she laid into them for milking the "Jasper almost died" cow.
I've also heard about not being able to get a tattoo when your drunk, which really sucks cause I'd love to get a tattoo but I'm such a big wimp I know I'd have to be wasted before doing it. Still though, the story was pretty realistic by you having Jasper know the guy. I'd imagine personal relationships with the tattoo artists probably give them a bit more leeway as to whether or not to put ink on a drunk. So it seemed like a realistic scene to me.
And I loved that they rode their bicycles to the bar. So cute.
Thanks for a terrific outtake! Looking forward to seeing B & E in the future.
Reviewer: licracker (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Stayed up all night reading this fanfic!
Thank you, and damn you!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
LOL
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