Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
go bella, she will be in edwards arms in a week, maybe less.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
that was awesome and sad and awesome and unforgetable
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
that is pure evil, and sorry i didnt leave at the last chapter i was in too big o a hurry to read, this is great stuff. Thanks
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
this is awesome, i love it! have to keep reading.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Its great, i love it!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Its great, i love it!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Its great, i love it!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Its great, i love it!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
good set up i like the way you have written edward, and everyone for that matter.
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Can't wait for more, just spent a lovely couple of hours catching up on the chapters I hadn't read.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
LOVVVVE IT!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
that was good, i loved the way you went right into it.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Very good.
Reviewer: FayeDeadly (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
:)
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
I just reread this last chapter to refresh my memory. I wish you would post another chapter soon as I really love this story and how you give the characters so much personality and truth. Edward and Jasper are so well written that I know I would fall in love with them myself if I met them! Can't wait to read more and find out what Bella will do about the new job offer and how Edward is going to handle the news.
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
!!!
Reviewer: Sewpark (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Live this story! Funny and sweet at the same time. It is so good to see these two main characters change their lives for each other. Good plot and each chapter is special.
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Sorry I haven't revisited, read and reviewed the story in while. But I love this story more and more with each chapter. It's awesome!! Congrats on being on PPSS that's amazing!! Loved this chapter and the interaction with James at the end!! Way to go Bella for putting him in his place. Not that it will change what he's doing much I don't think, but I loved it. The tatt thing was wonderful! Love tatts and love that Jasper and Edward both got one. Hilarious that the guy thought they were a couple! So funny!!!
Great story!!!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Oh SHIT! How did those drunk bastards ride bikes to the bar and then back home??? OMG I'm surprised neither hit the pavement while on their way home or to the bar!!
Aw I love it how they talk when they're wasted! Awesome Good!!
Poor E couldn't take the pain of the Tatt!! hahahah!! Priceless!!
Reviewer: Mile (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Thanks for your story, I'll be wainting for the next chapters
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
I love Edward and Jasper's tatts and that it hurt them ouch! ha Am sure Edward will need some time to adjust to cohabitation, in some ways he's so immature and inexperienced in life and relationships compared to Bella - gotta be some conflict in da house...
Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Alright, I'm sure this won't even get to you...just like the other reviews I've done...but I'm gonna give it a go anyway.
I've really enjoyed reading your story. I find the characters very endearing and sweet and quirky.
Very nicely done.
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Lovin' it, simply lovin' it. (Lifts glass) To brotherhood & sisterhood. Salute'
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
Lovin' it, simply lovin' it. (Lifts glass) To brotherhood & sisterhood. Salute'
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