Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Oh no! Bella should get a no contact order against James. They are pretty easy to get in WA.
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
oh my god, I about died laughing over all the things that got on Bella's nerves. My fiance and I just moved in together a month or so ago, and they're ALL THERE! lol I guess everyone goes through it, but your "alien" comparison is freaking on the money! *g*
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Great chapter. Nice to see them act like real people, driving each other crazy with the stupidest things. Wonderful to hear from you again. Hope you can post again soon! Things are really heating up.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
I am looking forward to the next chapter, but I really hope that James doesn't find a way to make Edward think Bella is cheating or get him pissed at her. That would really suck. Especially since she didn't tell him about the job offer. This was another great chapter though. I can't wait to read the next update.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
The chappie was worth the wait! Good job! I think James will try to do something to damage Edward's credibility since he is so new on the job... get Bella where it would hurt... not sure how he would do that, but James is one creepy mofo.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
I'm so glad to see that things are working so well between Edward and Bella-I was kind of hoping there wouldn't be a "new moon" period! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: leerleer (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
wow that was great cant wait for the next update... I've been biting my nails waiting for this. They are so cute...
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
can't wait for more
Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Okay, first of all welcome back we have missed you and these wonderful updates!!!!!!! This was one of your best, yet!!!! Okay, so naked Edward in the kitchen cleaning........sorry I think I died alittle. That was sooo hot and the whole bedroom scene...too much too much.
I do like the turn you are taking this with a threat from James. A little drama never hurts.
Again, glad to get your update!!!!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
First of all...Edward naked in an apron and saying the word sugar...thank goodness I was sitting...my knees gave out.
Really good chapter. Of course James is going to be horrible...maybe the offer is still open to help open the restaurant in the South.
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Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Well it sucks that she never told Edward about the offer, I wonder how it is going to come out.
Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Yay! You wouldn't believe how happy I was to come home from my crappy day at work and see that you had updated.
I absolutely adore this story and I can't wait for the next update. I'm dying to find out what happens.
-Jessica
Reviewer: TaraBarracuda (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
fantastic story! Bella needs to accept Bruce's offer and open a restaurant in Hilton Head!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Oh, James is going to be trouble!! I can't wait!! He'd better not hurt Bella!! Or Edward! This was such a great chapter and well worth the wait. I fear the next chapter is going to be tense and the wait will be torture! Great writing and I'm totally thrilled that you didn't abandon it. I didn't think you would be well, ya never know. *hugs*
Joan
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Awesome chapter! What's James going to do? I hope we get to see Edward kick his ass or something else equally as cool. I'm always excited to see a new chapter of your fic. Great writing!
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Maybe that concrete foundation will get some body-disposal use after all with James around.
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
...skuzzy little fucker. OMG. I'm about to bust myself with laughter. That's the best description of James in all of fanfic.
Thumbs up to Domesticward.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Uh oh, James is going to get his arse kicked by a very sexy Edward. I can't wait to see what James has up his sleeve to get back at Bella. I have a feeling it's going to be very bad!!! Please don't take too long with the next update, I've missed this story so, I thought something happen to you, but I'm glad it wasn't anything serious and that you're ok!!!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
SO good! I can't wait for more. Southernward is so sexy.
Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Good to have you back!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Oooooh! James is really creeping me out. I can't wait to see what you've come up with for him.
I totally agree with Bella...I appreciate a call or something if hubby's going to be late. There's late, and there's LATE, lol. And hubby did the whole "dishes and crusted food in the sink" thing too...totally gross. I've trained him well, though!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: valeri29 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
This is still one of my fave stories. I'm intrigued that you say whatever we're thinking will happen next is wrong. I do like a story that can be unpredictible while still working within the Twilight framework. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Great chapter!
I'm glad that James is gone...Although he might try to hurt Bella. :( I think that Edward might beat the crap out of him first, though.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Love your Edward and Bella! Very sweet.
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Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
awesome. I can't wait for more!!!!!
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