Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
This was my favorite line:
“All you had to do was ask, sugar. What took you so long?” I’ll be damned if the devil himself wasn’t shining right up at me in Edward’s unholy beautiful face.
This chapter was so funny to be, I just loved it.
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
James is scary, eek! I have no idea what is about to go down. A little worried though, that Edward is going to be upset Bella didn't tell him about the job offer. That's a big secret to keep, no matter the reason. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Loved this chapter, Edwards about to get all badass >< Ooh & your OS for Smut Mondays was so good!!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Loved the new chapter - while I'm very glad to see their living together is going well, I'm also happy to note you've made it realistic in that it's not all puppies and rainbows - they have their quirks and issues, but they're both adults and they talk it out (eventually). Ugh...James freaks me out. He's a nasty piece of work, but he's also pretty clever based on the shit he's pulled on Bella in the past - despite Bella's new-found acceptance of extra protection at work, I'm afraid that James will work out an opening at some point down the line. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to this news...something tells me the "gentleman" will be leaving this southerner pretty damn quickly!
Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
This was such an awesome chapter!! I love how you wrote it, especially how edward was like an alien!! haha
LOVED IT
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
You know she knows what he was dreamning about, lol.
Reviewer: Cullenbychoice (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Super chapter ! I like the way they enteret the bedroom :) its makíng it real.. not everything can be perfekt. Thank you!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
OMG...I knew they couldn't continue in lala land for much longer!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
ut oh
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Great chapter!!! I'm skeered of James - eek. So, will Edward ever find out about her job opportunity in the South??
Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
please tell me Edward gets to kick James' ass! And you know I'll never be able to do dishes again without picturing naked Edward!
Bethanne
Reviewer: lr51 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Edward is so sweet. I hope we get more details on Sam getting married while engaged to Bella. What a JEEEEEERK!!!!!!!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
One-shot sounds like fun i will have to read it. Thanks for updating, i will wait no matter how long you need to take. I have 4 kids and my hubby works oppisite shifts as me, so i can understand stuff. I like this and i'm glas you didnt have something happen to bella now. I could so see bella getting hurt and edward thinking she was pulling something or not even knowing until emmitt calls from the hospital. phew! thank goodness that didnt happen. But James will be getting a visit from the knuckle-fairy soon anyway right???
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Awesome chapter AGAIN! You totally ROCK! As was the Smut Mondays...LOVED the alternate view!!!
Reviewer: gigi (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Loved it! James has me worried, though. I know he has something up his sleeve. I hope Bella is careful!
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
awesome chapter! Please oh please don't make me wait so long!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Oh yeah, James is going to be trying something, I mean how could he not? But I don't know if it'll be within the next couple of chapters. This was really good, can't wait for another update!
Reviewer: lr51 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
I am enjoying the story so much. It is easy to read and flows really well. I can see myself reading only this until I catch up. It is a fun modern story.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Great chapter
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
This is not going to end well... for James anyway.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Please don't keep us waiting long!!! Defensive Edward, warm family, brotherhood thing.. love this story!!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Great chapter. I almost spit my coffee all over my computer screen at the funny parts. What a way to start off the day (I mean in a good way).
P.S. Your addition to Smut Mondays rocked!! I thoroughly enjoyed that.
Reviewer: lr51 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Ooo I got nervous when Bruce said he wanted to talk!! So glad it wasn't, um, too bad.....Poor Bella though....
P,S. I wouldn't mind seeing E in an apron...gosh what a sight that must be :)
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
laughed so hard at the vision i had in my head of edward being all caveman & whiking bella o bed only to do his elbow & toes an injury, as for james no suprises there really we all knew he was bad news, please please not so long for updates we all love this story
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