Reviewer: pixdog (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
lol I am from SC and you are getting our accents perfectly lol mine is so bad that it sometimes comes out in my writting.
Reviewer: pixdog (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
lol sleep humping too funny. Great job
Reviewer: pixdog (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Wow that was hot. Good job so far.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
HILARIOUS!!!
LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
We've known James is an ass and that he seems a bit unstable so I am worried about what he might do to Bella. I wouldn't put it past him to take it out on Edward either! I know they are still finding their way into living together and that is sometimes rough. I do miss them being in the warm weather and I hope they get a chance to go visit Edward's family soon. They need to break things up a bit and have some fun away from work....they both work too much! My alerts are all wonky and not getting them so I almost missed this update. Hope you'll post again soon....love this story and your style. Thanks again for sharing it with us!
Reviewer: ej-ink (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
LOVE THIS STORY.
Nitpick: I think you wrote Renee and Phil in an earlier chapter, not Renee and Charlie. Forgive me if someone has already caught it. :)
Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
LoL!
Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Lots of little fights/arguments, but it looks like they resolved them okay. It's a healthy thing to learn how to do.
How upset will Edward be when he finds out Bella didn't tell him about her job opportunity? And what is James going to do?? Yikes!
Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
LoL!
Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
You are such a tease. Great tension. Great chemistry. Throw in a dash of sex and you have a recipe for a fantastic story. Loving it.
Linda
Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Reading this straight through. Blown away. Life has a way of making the important things slam you in the face. Damn. This a great story.
Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Very honest. Very real. Totally absorbing. Fortunate to have found this when so many chapters have been written. It reads like a very good book. Super chacterizations. believable story line. Enjoying this. You sold me.
Reviewer: ilive4music (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Okay, I don't know where to start. I really liked Jasper's background story. The shot at Edward about Bella having a thing for Jake made me laugh out loud. And......I can't believe I'm actually admitting this but the end of this chapter actually made me tear up a bit. Stupid wine! Such a good story. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Sometimes wild abandon brings out our truer natures. A classy gal who lets it all go can wind up very very happy. I heartily recommend it. Been married to that man for 33 years.
Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Just foud this little gem. Loving it. Well written. Yummy
Reviewer: michaelsgirl (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Loved it, as usual! I have to say, I can't believe someone would have the nerve to take your story and try to make it their own. That's just wrong! You are an extremely talented writer. You know they say if someone copies you, you should take it as a compliment. But not if they try to take credit for it! It's one thing if it's a fashion statement or something - ha! Anyways, I love the story. Can't wait to see what happens at the new job and with James.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
I totally dislike Sam, and that's a good reason for making Sam her ex. I totally get it now!
Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Hmmm, I like this very much. Good bit of work to come back to after my impromptu no internetfiasco. Good work m'dear!
~Wolf
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Edward and Bella are sounding very like a normal, happy couple. A few kinks, a few problems to work out, but a whole lot of love. The kind of love we all wish we could find. Of course everything couldn't be idyllic, now could it? Damn that James! I am hard pressed to even like the actor who portrays him. LOL
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Hmm, I guess we will finally get to see the full extent of James's despicable nature. Your tease at the end makes me think his revenge is not going to be as straight forward as one might expect - but what I'd like to see is Edward beat the shit out of him. I don't suppose he'll be so obvious as to wait for her in the alley, especially as she's like to have people looking out for her there, so maybe he'll be watching the house, waiting for Edward to be absent before he makes his dastardly move. Hope we find out soon!
Reviewer: fanofbones (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
I started this Friday night and just got caught up...what an adorable story this is....very well written and delicious with the humor, the snark, the fun and the great sex scenes. I will continue to watch for updates...
This was awesome....
fab
Reviewer: Bionic Becks (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
I Hope you update very soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Squee. Hmmm i really like your offer and I am debating should I ask fro help with my 1st and major lemon its apivital point in my story and yours are always so umm...JUICY! How much do we have to donate? How will you know if I did and what say you to helping me?
Loved this chapter scared shitless to know whats to come!
Oh and if heaven't already check out my story and see if you think you like teh flow and I'll make the deal!
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
dun-dun-duuunnn.... what does James have up his sleeve? can't wait to see!
Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
"He smelled like sun and salt water and coconut scented sunscreen and sweat." This might be my very favorite Edward yet!!!!
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