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Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
i dont think edwards track record sounds so bad if he was just trying to find the right girl....as for alices parents...wow...that is rough...but i guess the brandons as they were in the real twilight story werent exactly nice ppl either,.,,,,jasper is a sweetheart,,,,
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
i am happy for edward for his interview on one hand but the other what emmett said about him working and never seeing the light of day,.../that is as bad as bella...while i am all for living your work drea,ms...if it takes you away from the things that are important like friends and family then i dont think that the job is a good idea for either of them...i like the advice that bellas boss gave her
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
im g;ad he hit him...sam deserved it....and if bella yells at him i will be so pissed...great job edward
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
bellas negative attitude about everything kinda pisses me off....edward isnt chaunvenistic and i get what he meant...of course bella turns it around and like a typical whiny feminist she thinks he means that she uses her body and whatever to get to the top...she made me mad but edward still sweet as ever...love alices personality! lol love the painting
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
i wonder what the sleeping arrangements will be after all edward allowed bella to be in his bed all week...will bella return the favor?
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
i never agreed with the imprinting thing like i didnt agree that for someone who was supposed to have a soulmate she should never have been able to fall in love with jake and edward,,,,if edward is your soulmate once you see him you shouldnt be able to feel anything but friendship for jake,,,i never got it...the imprinting thing...i always felt bad for leah...
as for your story i hope that considering what an idiot sam is and how obvious that is that she doesnt spend ridiculous amounts of time mooning over sam...and the loss of what she could have had when edward and his family are so much better a thing to look forward to having in your life...
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
i dont think they got together to fast,,,they are in there mid to late twenties,,,and they had sex,...its a typical thing in that age....i mean its not ideal always to start a relationship like that but its possible for it to work...i like esmes idea of bella coming to the south...edwards family is cool...poor jasper.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
ha ha love it!....and sam is a dick!
Reviewer: roxyTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
wow!! that was hot!!*sighhh*!!!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
she should seriously stop being so negativre...i mean seriously pointing out everything that is wrong with them and why it wont work,.,,,blah,,,,edward is so the sweetheart,,,and sounds hot,,,he could add on those type of buildings to his fathers firm,,,expand the business,,, carolina sounds nicer then seattle would be,.,,
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
alice is right...bella needs to move on with someone better and hotte,r,,,she could even move to carolina...it seems warm and great and edwards architect firm that he will run soon will be there so why not...
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Bella is irritating...going for jake serious;y? arghhh!...edward as a southerner sounds hot...love the accent! cant wait for it to come out all over the place lol
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
poor edward...lol he shouldve just kept on trying to F%*$ her and then he wouldnt have said something to make her think otherwise
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
i can see why she acted like that but honestly she seems a little whiney,,,hopefully she stops that ...edward sounds hot though woo hoo
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
this was great thank you for sharing it! Wish you would have did an epi about how they were a few years down the road and what happened to james ect...but either way I love it
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Awww! Tears! Real ones....
Reviewer: enamoramiento (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Awww... a nice way to wrap this up! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
a Awww how perfect and cute. I was sooo excited to see the update. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Bratt (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Waited to read your story in full and it was worth the wait! The were a very sweet couple and Edward was so lovable that i would like to have him for myself. Thanks for sharing and i hope you write some more for us soon!
Reviewer: crazyweirdbeautiful (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Niiiice! :D
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Great ending!!!
Reviewer: abracadabra (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Fabulous story. I could read it again and again. It's so perfect I don't want to change anything. It was really hard to hate Bella in this story... I think i'm going soft!!!!! 10 out of 10 thankyou.
Reviewer: Bad_Days (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
You, my dear, are a writer. It might be fanfiction, but it still means so much to us readers. Thank you so much for sharing your writing, and this story, with us!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
That was truly a perfect ending. Jumping in with both feet....Great job.
Reviewer: LADARTHA (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
ENJOYED THE STORY FROM BEGINNING TO END. HOPE YOU WILL ADD AN EPILOGUE.
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