Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
love it, cant wait 4 more
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Your reputation for evilocity is secure. I for one, care not about the location of Alice and Jasper I do care that James ruined the lemon! JERK! I hope Edward kicks his butt, but only if he won't get into any trouble of course. Edward's too pretty to go to jail.
Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Oh, my. I love this story with all my heart, it's amazing and my heart happy dances whenever you update. now a cliffie is not nice and you know it so just hurry up and update sugar ;)
Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Wow! That was a cliffie... I'm betting he's not going after James though. I'm betting he just needed to leave to "get some air" or something like that. But while he's doing that, I wonder if James is going to try to approach Bella at her home? Hmmm... so many possible scenarios.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Well Paige we can't have you losing your edge but I wouldn't say you have a reputation for evilocity. Emmett may not agree. But I am pretty sure Rosalie is pretty happy that you are forcing his hand to make some kind of committment. As far as Jasper and Alice are concerned I was kind of wondering that myself. Do you think they may have run off get married. I know that is not Alice's style but we don't always know what these kids are thinking.
I am not sure what I think of the Bella/Edward argument. I would have done exactly as Bella did. Had she left it would have pretty much defeated the purpose of his move.
And James. That is just creepy. Can you imagine what it would be like for someone to just pop up here and there to stalk you. I can certainly understand Edward's protective side coming out. But what is going to happen should Edward go off after James only to have James hiding in wait for Edward to leave and then making his move on Bella. Yeah, now that would be creepy.....
Sandra
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
I know angst and cliffies are necessary...but they are still hard to read. Edward and Bella have the "both right and both wrong" virus...both need to consider their behavior and apologize.
Love southern Edward...just wonder if he wouldn't want to leave Seattle and have Bella start up the restaurant in the South.
Good chapter. Look forward to more.
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Reviewer: jerogers06 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
No.... He has to come back and fix this! They both need to fix this!
Reviewer: princesspewo (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
You are so evil! Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
i hate it when they fight
make them take it back
Reviewer: pdxamy (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
No! I got very little sleep last night reading this story and it ends with a fight and him storming off. Noooo. I really love your characters and your Edward is endearing and chivalrous. Please have them make up soon.
Reviewer: mini (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
make up sex, romantic stuff next chapter.
or u will die
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
I love your cliffies. Cliffies mean there's more story to come, and that's a good thing.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Uh Oh now its getting real. So Edward drove off in a fit. Not the best thing to be doing but I have a feeling it will work out.
Reviewer: StefPhillips (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Alright with a cliffie like that do we get a relatively fast update time? lol :) this is an awesome story !
Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Great chapter! Loved the cliffhanger. Is he going after James? :o
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
DAMMIT. This got so fucking interesting! PLease don't leave us hanging for too long :(((
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Oh what is Edward doing now? They really need to work on communication!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Ah, hell, the s**t is hitting the fan all over the place. James is still creeping me out, and I just knew Edward would be upset that Bella didn't mention the job offer. Oh, and please don't let him get his pretty southern face all beat up!!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
It's not often I agree with both sides of an argument. Yikes, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
OH wow...so i just started reading this story and I love it so so so much. your storyline is amazing and so is your writing....I hate the cliffe lols but I can't wait for more of this amazing story!!!!
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Oh crap! Please tell me he is not going after James!!! Good cliffe!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
man... i HATE cliffhangers.
please post soon.
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
NOOOO!!!! A big fight, but no lemon? Help a sista out! Just kidding. Keep up the fantastic work!
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
grr! you are evil! Glad she finally told him about the restaurant. I hope Edward cools off soon before he does something stupid!
UPDATE SOON!!!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
AHHH - More, More, MORE! I gotta know what happens next. Where does he go. Drive around the block mad, beat up James! what, where! Ok i can wait. hopefully not to long. thanks!
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