Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Very good. Love it!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Hmmmmm What's in Edwards Closet??? God, I'd love to be in his closet or Emmetts. Hmmm, Oh... Very Good chapter.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
So glad that Sam got Hit!!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
OMG, I love the Sex painting. So funny.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Very good, I especially like the Line "Have I mentioned that Alice is a devious, manipulative Liar?" Very funny, very true.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
Very good, Sam Sucks!! Esp in Breaking Dawn when he tries to win Leah back to his pack by saying he misses her. Awesome!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
terriffic chapter, I just love over protective Edward and stuborn Bella. I am sure everything will work out for them, just as long as Edward doesn't do anythg stupid, I can't wait to see what happens, and how Edward and Bella and Emmett and Rosalie make up. Please don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapter, Oh evil one
Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
I knew it wouldn't be all sunshine and rainbows! I just hope whatever Edward is going to do doesn't involve him getting thrown in jail or ending up in the ER! I so love this story and can;t wait for the update! I think E&B both need to concede a bit and learn to live together as a couple instead of two individuals sharing a house. It's hard to do when you don't really have a committment or haven't talked about the long term (marriage, family, etc.)... They need to have that talk!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Holy Shit - that was a realistic chapter. I like that your Bella and Edward are not perfect and their relationship is not perfect. They seem very true to life and that's refreshing!
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Knew that bastard was going to do this!!!!
Reviewer: Ellis (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
see i would do exactly what alice did, but if it was done to me i would put BBQ pixie on the menu.
happy days - lemonie goodish is on the way :D
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Well, crap!!!! That really sucks!
Reviewer: Ellis (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
i think tht the pace of this story is fine, we all read the blurb, look at the title for G*ods sake!!!
im glad their 1st time was different
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
LMAO!
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
This is just what Alice would do!!!
Reviewer: ellla (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
Oh my, I LOVED this chapter. the end was hilarious, when everybody else than bella were drunk. and the painting, perfect! thank you, I have to stop reviewing now, gotta continue reading ;)
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
LMAO!!!!1
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Cool... :)
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
This is great!!!
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Awkward..... :)
Reviewer: AMK78 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
nice!
Reviewer: cygnet715 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
... meh? I knew, I KNEW, with a title like that, this chapter was not going to be pretty. Gah. Stupid relationship problems. stupid stupid stupid.
I=pwned. Sighing and waiting for update.
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Ah! Stupud James causing problems! I can't wait to find out what happens!!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
wow first Em and Rose fighting.. now Edward heads out after a fight with Bella... I cant wait to see where ya go with this.. keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Cosmikou (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
just thank you for your story, love your plot and characters, your lemons are good too !
When I read Edward calling Bella "sugar", the first thing that came in mind was " I want you" by marvin gaye... so my mood was set up for the rest of the reading LOL
can't wait for the next chapter !
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