Yes, thank you for rescuing Jasper from life support before the end of the chapter! I'm glad that the girls got to Fla so quickly to be right where they needed to be, but I have a bad feeling about James. He's  being way too cooperative. In the long run, I do think that Bella could find a new job if necessary, but he still shouldn't be an evil weasel.

Oops that fight couldnt have come at a worse time for them.  Now Bella is home alone and James is on prowl - maybe they just played right into his hands.

Loving your characters, so true to their "selves" but original too!!!

I guess I'll just have to start a club called "I hate dumb-ass James.CO" Jeez... And Edward is acting like a teenage boy, as Bella said! Oh my... I'm starting to think that Edward's gonna be hurt really bad...

*Emm and Rose will be fine, won't them?

Post it soon! It took me a long time to be brave enough to read the chapter, now I need more!

xoxo

Oh no, I hope I haven't sounded like a Bella hater in my reviews. I really am more of a Bella nudger who would gladly take her place. I like you're author's notes at the end where you do a little recap and sometimes give us a teaser.

Actually, I'm glad that Edward pushed a little, cause Bella is really driving me bonkers. He keeps putting himself out there and being honest with her about how he feels, and she randomly alternates between hot and cold. I say it's her turn to take a leap of faith. Wow, I sound really heartless.

I feel so badly for Edward that Bella is so skitish. Hopefully she won't push him away too much or so many times that he backs off. I'm looking forward to Jasper's maybe proposal and Charlie/Renee seem nice. I like having them together cause I've always felt Charlie deserved it.

I'm so relieved to know that Edward has some fight in him and didn't hesitate to take on Sam. Jeez, what an asshole he is thinking he's still got any kind of a claim on Bella. I don't mean to doubt our girl, but she better not give Edward any crap for defending her.

Oh! I am new to Twilight so I have a late start on this fic! I can't wait to read more!

Very good, Esp about the magic cleaning fairies.

Damn James! Lines like these -  “Soon. So, are you happy-horny drunk or fall-asleep-in-the-car-on-the-way-home drunk?” I looked up into his face, fighting the urge to start making out with him in front of his boss and colleagues. “The sooner you take me home, the better your odds are.” - Need to equal bedtime lemons. I know that's written somewhere or it may even be law :) If it's not I'm going to write one.  Please let us know how Em makes it up to Rose. Girls night out also sound fun.

Very good.

Very good.