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Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
excellent as always
cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: sparklebbyface (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Mmm, makeup sex (:
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
I feel something bad is coming soon.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
THANK YOU!!! I don't like ExB to be left hanging and fighting! Not nice!!! Good make up lemon!!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Awesome chapter!
Makes me want to beg for more!
PS - I melt a little every tiem Edward says 'Sugar'.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Oooh! A make-up lemon! Yummy! I loved it. I'm glad they made up. Can't wait for the next update. I hope that James gets what's coming to him.
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Awesome chapter!
I'm glad things are getting worked out between them. :)
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
there wasn't anything to forgive... I am glad they worked it out in their own special way!!!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Oh Paige, do you have any idea what a that man does to me with his southern accent when he calls her sugar? I damn near forget everything else that is going on the the story prior to. That and I have to stop reading so I can comprehend what comes after.
I could not help but giggle just a bit that when he left he did not go far. Actually I was glad he stayed nearby. His call to Jasper seemed to calm him considerably.
Loved how Bella continued to clean the closet as she spoke with Edward. Again I had to giggle as it is something I would do. I mean how is a girl going to hold her own when a man is obviously trying to apologize or "steamroll". Yes, concentration is the key. Ah but I am glad they made up.
I am 100% with Edward on the James front. He is just too damn creepy!
Sandra
Reviewer: T Kitty (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Yay!!! thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: grlanachronsm (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Oh, I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. I love your version of Edward (Ah , he can call me "sugar" anytime he wants!) and I love how this played out.
More?
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Nice lemon! But still very, very anxious for more chapters!!
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Loved the floor/bed distinction.
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Ud sooon
Reviewer: lazykate (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
Mmmm, makeup sex...gotta love it!
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Well, you certainly haven't relinquished your "evilocity"!
What are you trying to do? Give me a heart attack?!
And just how often do you update? I only found this story about a week ago, and I already made it to the end of what you've got. What a place to leave it, too!
I won't repeat what practically everyone says in reviews, but ... you know what I'm thinking... what I want to demand, right? I'll try to be patient. :?
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
sniff
Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
perfection
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
I loved the line, "I was even going to let them soak overnight and wait to put them in the dishwasher in the morning. I was growing." haha
As for getting the restraining order, besides 'he was standing there," why not that he threatened her infront of a whole room of witnesses, showing up at a place that there would be no possible way he would know of unless he was following her, etc etc.
I hope Edward doesn't go after James. It would be doing exactly what James would want. But, I can't imagine Edward leaving Bella alone. Even if Edward went to James house, who's to say that James was there? What if James went to their house and now can get to Bella? hmmm?
Ok, sorry for the uber long review, all in all, great chapter!! Hope you update soon!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Wow, wonder what Edward is going to do...oh btw, great chapter! Bella should have told Edward about the job offer because you know if the situation was reversed than she would be pissed at Edward for not telling her.
Reviewer: GabrielCullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
update pleaseee....................
I beg you.....
I've been frustated for not knowing what will happen to them...
please, let them back in one piece and get over with these fights...
plese???? update sooner???
really love your work, truly
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Bruce's proposition is an exciting one, but I don't think that's an acceptable sacrifice for Bella right now (even though she didn't ask me), whatever Jasper is hiding from Alice is probably something that will make her happy cause that's just the kind of guy he is, and James just needs to go. Since he actually isn't any kind of a threat, I don't propose painful, bodily harm, but I really do want him outta here.
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
True, Edward is changing basically every aspect of his life and that's got to be pretty jarring, even if he doesn't think it's going to be. Buying a house together is a very big thing and implies some kind of permanence. I hope this doesn't push either of them over the edge in a panic. We know Edward noticed Bella's accidental reference to her wedding, but what is he thinking??
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
If this isn't headed in the direction I'm thinking, then what direction could it be headed? I'm thinking that James set Bella up and Bruce is going to tell her to get back asap or lose her job, but maybe that's the predictible answer and he's going to tell her to take all the time she needs. Hmmm. Now I think that he's going to tell her to come back as soon as she can and he's going to fire James, and then James is going to try to get revenge on Bella by doing something terrible to Edward. Actually, I really have no clue.
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