Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I can't believe James dosed Bella's drink. I hope Edward and Emmett beat the shit out of him.
Reviewer: gypsymomma (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Welcome back looking forward to seeing where the story leads from here!
Reviewer: GarbageHeapRose (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Thanks for a wonderful update! I hope they find James & string him up by his toenails... :)
:GHR:
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Oh no!!! That bastard. Alice isn't pregnant by any chance, is she??
Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
great chapter... loved Emmet's wig... that was a great idea!!! can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Loving the angst, great chapter! (:
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
An excellent chapter, and holy crikey, James is a mega-douche! Can't wait to see where they all go from here. And I'm getting the feeling that perhaps Alice's over-the-top emotions and her mention of wanting to eat all the time might not just be the result of PMS and missing Jasper, as she seems to think....
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
i have waited long enough for this but it was worth it
Reviewer: EmpressOperaDiva (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Honey don't apologize for needing time on chapters... We're adults and life comes at you every day in varying ways. I am happy to see an update! This story is too good to not be completed!
I love thinking of Edward all southern and yummy... I live in the south, trust me I know these men!
As far as this chapter is concerned... I am really happy Edward and Bella are in a good place and honestly I am really happy that even though James slipped her that GHB she was with both her friends, brother AND her boyfriend. Honestly that was a comfort. I know she was probably comforted in that fact as well.
Sad to see Alice leave so soon!! OH and BIG hug for Emmett and Edward!!! That was so cute and I loved it!
Thanks for this great story love!
All my best,
Michelle/OperaDiva6 or EmpressOperaDiva on here.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Great chapter! I love how Emmett proposed. Update soon!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Damn! That James is an evil piece of work!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I dont know about Seattle but where I live your details about getting the restraining order were accurate. I helped a client get one against her abusive husband. Bella should appear in court over the matter at some point for the order to be granted long term.
Ok, don't laugh but my knowledge of alcohol is very limted. I was nine months pregnant on my 21st birthday :) So what is all in the drink called panty droppers. For my 30th birthday which will be 80's themed (So I just loved all the music named) For the party you have to dress up 80's style. We are going Skating with the kids, dinner and then out to the bar. So I may have to try one.
Another great Chapter and I hope your enjoying 2010!
Reviewer: Tina18 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
amazing chapter. loved it :)
Reviewer: tania18 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Thank you so much for the chapter.
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Wow, that last note about james not caring which drink was which really speaks volumes about the character you're creating. Good job! I'm glad you approached Alice's issues, bella and rose will understand. Go emmett! that was so great, i can't believe he proposed. Can't wait for your next chapter
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
James is such an ass! Thanks for updating. You're one of my fav writers! I love your version of these characters...they seem like old friends. Can't wait to see where this one's going!
Reviewer: nana11 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
oh i love love love this story :) it's so exciting what'll happen next.
grrr james is really a fcuking son of a bitch. i hope the police will get him but my hopes are not so confident of it :-/ aww poor alice, i can understand she wants to be with jasper asap, they are soooo cute togheter hehe
but dammit... that little fight between bella and edward was damn hot, okay maybe not the fight itself but the conciliation ;-) very hot yummie ;)
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
OMG!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
OK, I know a bit, but I won't be picky.
Emmett and Rose engaged! YAY! Alice moving away. BOO! Jasper not there for the fun. Bummer. Edward being a silly horses ass. Fun!
James slipping something into their drink? What a jerk. I hope he gets found and gets what's coming to him. Again, he's a Jerk!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
worth the wait... wish there was more talking after .. hope there is more in in the next..
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Yay - I'm glad that you are back! I totally love your fic and get more than a little excited when you update!
I like the angst - building the tension is always so juicy, especially when it brings out Protectiveward! Yum, I like him.....
Happy New Year to you and thanks for the update! xxx
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
What a Bastard! I know that the law should handle this but not gonna lie here. I would LOVE to see Edward kick his ass 6 ways to Sunday. He deserves so much more than that. I love it when Edward gets pissed!
Great Chapter. I look forward to the next!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
this is working up the tension really really well! i am really enjoying this story and i hope rl lets you update sooner! happy new year!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
loved the 80s night lots of good memories
Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Still lovin' your story and can't wait for more....James is such a dickhead, I am sure they will catch him, but what damage will he do first? Looking forward to the next time they are all together back in the South with Jasper...always fun!!! Great Great job and looking forward to more, as always!
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