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Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

LOVING how you brought sam into this. i totally agree with you about the ridiculous excuse of imprinting. well done!

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

loved the lemon :)

Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Oh, my god. Oh, my GOD! I am pegging you to my fav. I just found this today. I love all things B and E, vampire or human. Cannot wait for more!

Thanks

Maria

Check out my fic if you have a chance!

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

loving the story

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

i love southern gentlemen :)

Reviewer: twilighter023 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

wow :) sorry i havent reviewed for this greatly awesome story and i CAN NOT WAIT for the upcoming chapters or chapter honestly you are a wonderful writer :)

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

I'm glad that Bella finally takes James for the evil person he is. I cannot see these three couples living apart. You must have something up your sleeve to get them all to live in one city. Can't wait to find out what you do next!

Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

I hate the bastard and I hope Edward does kill him in some seemingly self-defense kind of way of course.

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

*Thumbs up*  You've just upped the ante a lot, and I like it!

Reviewer: TwiMon (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

This chapter was AWESOME! I laughed so hard 'n almost peed my pants. Great stuff!!

Reviewer: marlievic (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Great chapter! Also, I think Alice is pregnant.  But that she doesn't know it yet!

Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Good chapter glad your continuing I like this story alot.  Happy New year.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Talk about mood swings, lol. This chapter definitely caused them! Soo freaking thrilled by Emmett's grand gesture and the ensuing bubble of happiness caused by that. Loved Em and Edward being an 80s "rock band".

But Alice really had me sad and worried and then happy again. 

And then B wakes up in the hospital. WTH! That fricking James. Though I have to admit that I am curious to hear more details about the night that B doesn't remember at all. And I have a feeling that James had better hope that the police find him and not Edward or Emmett, though I doubt that's how it will actually happen, lol, not that I mind. ;)

As always, totally looking forward to more of this story!

Reviewer: aprilakaksmom (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

More more more more more!

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Damn James!  I am so glad that Edward made Bella call the police.  Please don't leave us hanging for very long with this major cliffhanger!

Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Enjoying this story !!!! I'm glad Bella has some grit. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Reviewer: skitts (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

OMG! Poor Bella!  Poor Alice! I know she's going to feel even more guilty leaving the girls.

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

no biggie, it fiction. that was good. we all know james is a bastard. i hope he gets whats comming to him. this was good though LOVED the proposal. my was quiter and my hubby was so nurvious he spent most of our dinner in the bathroom pumping himself up to propose in public. down on one knee and not in my food, thank god! I love the 80's they rock! And truly i wonder what Vampire Rose would have been like in the 80's LOL!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Great writing. I hope SOMEONE kicks James' butt and they lock him up and toss the key! Readers shouldn't quibble over inaccuracies. This is all for the angst! I never realized how many of us LOVE it! LOL Great writing!!

joan again. :)

Reviewer: LikeToRead (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Yowsa, that James is a BAD guy.  Loved the proposal. So funny.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Awesome, as always!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

GREAT cHAPTER!  I LOVED THE PROPOSAL IT WAS SO EMMETT!!!

I can't wait to see how they catch James!  Alice and Jasper need to move North not South!!

Post again soon!!!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Wow....love the idea of Emmett singing!

And another wow....totally didn't see that one coming! (With James and Bella's drink)

Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

I found this line extremely amusing: "The sibling relationship is complicated: One moment you want them dead, the next moment you want to kill them."

Your story is fun stuff, I like it!

Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

Ahh Aly is leaving too soon! What are we going to do about James!!! I Need another chapter quick hahaha

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