Reviewer: rash12 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
great chapter!!!! love this story!!! I so want Alice to be pregnant!...bet is gonna be funny when Rose and Bella try to tell her!! Hope you update soon!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Great Work! I am so glad they caught James... very manipulative! As always I was shocked but I am glad at least for now he is in jail hopefully they will send him to a psycho hospital where he can get help!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Post again soon!!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I have a feeling Bella is not going to be happy at heroward and Emmett when she hears what they did. LOL
Alice may be pregnant. Well, that will be interesting. :)
Reviewer: sparklebbyface (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
That's some freaky shit. I'd be scared shitless if James were real.
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
as always well writin
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Ok so I say that james has someone helping him and that it is only going to get better from here.. I would be pissed as hell at edward and emmett if I were bella but also very thnakful after I beat the shit out of them
Reviewer: TaraBarracuda (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Another great one! Update soon!
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
oooooh that is so wrong. You need to update.
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I just love southern Edward!! and I was wondering when James was going to make his move. I am wondering if Bella is right he is going to do something to either brake her and Edward up or get Edward in trouble. hmmm I guess we shall see. Please post again soon..
Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Amazing as usual. Can't wait for more.
-Jessica
Reviewer: smajors (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
that was so fucking bad ass
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
I love that he calls her sugar in this instead of love.
Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Great chapter!
Reviewer: SLauren25 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
This is amazing!!! I live in Charleston, and I have lived SC my whole life so I can picture everything you're describing which just makes it all the more real! And the thought of Edward being southern and so mannerable and gentlemanly... Gah! It's killing me haha. Excellent work!!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
All she wants to do is eat and sleep, huh? Well, that sounds interesting!
James Hunter, hilarious.
I have a feeling they are all gonna be hitched and pregnant by the time this is over, not that I mind, I'm big on the married with a baby and a beautiful house ideal!
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
My mum and I call the piggly wiggly the hoggly woggly.
Reviewer: becckaw (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Oh my god!
And is Alice pregnant? She just wants to eat and sleep...suspicious.
Reviewer: MidnightKat (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Wonderful Story. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: edwardsbitch (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
I absolutely love the story so far. This side of Edward is awesome!!! I will read anything else you write. Very very good. You have an awesome talent. Keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Loved the chapter. Is Alice pregnant? Or am I reading too much into her tears, PMS and eatting? Cant wait to read whats next
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
WOW. That bastard
Oh pleeeze let Emmett & Edward at him!!!
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I am so loving this story. I used to be married to a FF so it really rings true in so many ways. I'm a new reader but I like the way you have them working thru their issues in such a realistic & sensible way. They are both such sweet souls. Please update soon.
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I am so loving this story. I used to be married to a FF so it really rings true in so many ways. I'm a new reader but I like the way you have them working thru their issues in such a realistic & sensible way. They are both such sweet souls. Please update soon.
Reviewer: noxetdies (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
That was a great start! I'm rather glad they stopped at that point, actually. I hate it when things move too quickly! Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
i love this story. i need more... please soon
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