Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Damn James to hell!
He DID ruin a possibly insanely fuckawesome Lemon!!
Grrr*
But W.O.W...that was one hella mash up :O
I'd back away slowly from that scene right there lol.
Great chap!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Damn James to hell!
He DID ruin a possibly insanely fuckawesome Lemon!!
Grrr*
But W.O.W...that was one hella mash up :O
I'd back away slowly from that scene right there lol.
Great chap!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
Damn James to hell!
He DID ruin a possibly insanely fuckawesome Lemon!!
Grrr*
But W.O.W...that was one hella mash up :O
I'd back away slowly from that scene right there lol.
Great chap!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Gah, crazy James!!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
That was pretty action-packed. I am glad that they finally got James. Talk?? He could have just called their house and left crazy messages if he wanted to talk, lol. I'm sure Bella will be both pissed and grateful that Edward and Emmett got him, though.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I love all the details you included in this chapter. You write very richly, nothing dry, nothing boring, I love reading your story.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
crazy james!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
Aww, how I've missed SouthernWard!!
I've been behind on a lot of my usual fics, but now I'm getting back into the groove of things.
Awesome chap, "shagging competition" had me LOLing my ass off!
and life with Bella and Edward is all sunshine and rainbows, there's a downside as well. Not prob cuz they get through it all.
James is still the creepy motherfucker he always was, Edward needs to ive him a real beat down lol.
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
The sting op was awesome but of course B's gonna be pissed! Did they actually get a restraining order on James? Does it matter that she wasn't actually in the house eventhough he thought she was for it to be broken then? I have to admit that I was totally assuming that E & Em would get hurt again and be in the hospital like with the surfing accident. I kept thinking... "wow B just doesn't get a break!" Glad I was wrong... so far at least.
Reviewer: valeri29 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I want to see what happens with Alice and Jasper once they figure out what's going on with her!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Welcome back, gorgeous! You were missed. Exciting chapter!!!! I can't wait to find out about Alice! I hope nothing happens at lunch...And oh yeah, James is certifiable. Megacreep. Yay for Em and Edward and their wiley plans to corner the skeezy bastard!
Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
great chapter!! I bet Bella is going to be mad and kind of thankful at the same time... at least that's how I would feel... can't wait to see if Alice is really pregnant... that would be fun!! =D
Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I totally loved the set up. James had it coming and then some. I hope they're able to throw the book at him. Hopefully being a stalker and breaking and entering will play into the whole bail thing. I picked up on Alice's comment last chapter about eating and crying. I'm looking forward to learning whether or not she's pregrant and how she and Jasper will handle things either way. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm anxiously awaiting the alert for the next one.
Reviewer: bricullen14 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
IloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyouIloveyou. NO seriously, I love you. This is my FAVORITE story on Twilighted, and you don't disappoint!!!!
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Knowing Bella, she'll probably be upset w/them for not telling her and putting themselves in danger and might assume that they are trying to make decisions w/out her consent. Can't wait to find out if Alice is really pregnant or not.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Oh Bella is going to be very upset! The risks that Edward and Emmett took are going to put her through the roof-what if he had a gun?!!! And now that Edward knows he's certifiable, there will be no let down of guard!
Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
love this story
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
oh goodness I don't know about all that....I knwo RL is a bitch...and they always come back! So I guess I will just go for the happy ending.....James gets his ass literally handed to him.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Wonderful. I love what Emmett and Edward did, very good. I think Bella might be upset that they put themselves in harms way.
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
“Mmmhmm. And maybe I’d make a great kindergarten teacher.” I love this line. :)
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
The thing about someone breaking in while I'm home alone? Totally a major phobia of mine. *shudder*
Great chapter - I can't wait to see what happens when Bella comes home.
Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Oooo.. I think Bella is going to be pissed that they risked themselves but happy once she calms down that he's in jail. And i really hope Alice is pregnant!!! I can't wait for more!
Bethanne
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Unbelievable!! Bravo!!!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
oh bella's going to be grateful, i'm sure. what they did was good, efficient, and pretty legal. good chapter! can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I think that Bella will be both pleased at pissed. I think she will be upset that Edward went against her wishes and did something dangerous, but I think she will be relieved that the ordeal with James is 'over'.
Excellent work on this chapter!!!
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