Reviewer: GinaMarieCULLEN (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
You're doing a great job with the story LOVE IT!!!! Totally was shocked about Emmett!!! I loved that he proposed to Rose!!!! KUDOS!!!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Amazing past two chapters! Can't wait to see what really happens!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
wow, that was very intense! Bella is going to be SO MAD! and I hope Alice really is pregnant, they are so sweet!
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
that outtake would be so worth reading, hope it would come out soon =)
Reviewer: LikeToRead (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Your James is SO scary. Love this twist. Great chapter. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Great chapter. Hope to have an update soon about alice
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Great chapter. Oh I'm sure Bella's gonna be pissed! Big time but when the dust settles I think she'll be grateful he's finally behind bars. I hope they do a mental test on the bum to find out that he reallly is totally nutso!! LOL. And as for Alice, I truly hope she's not preggers yet. It's hard enough being newly weds and learning to live as man and wifey without the added pressure of a baby along the way. Can't wait for the next chapter, please don't make us wait too long again? Hope things are going a little easier for you and you get your groove back. :)
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
bella is gonna be pissed...
Thanks
Reviewer: skitts (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
wow.. James just freaked me out on this chapter! I really hope justice gets served!!! Poor Bella!
great work as always!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Well I think Bella is going to be very upset that Emmett and Edward put themselves at risk, especially when she finds out how crazy/psycho James really is...but I believe she will also be grateful that he was arrested. At least now they know what they are really dealing with.
It was interesting to hear Bella's thoughts about marriage...if only she and Edward would just communicate! But then again...it was makes them grow as a couple.
Great chapter and of course the "sugars" were perfect.
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Reviewer: pianoloverr7 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
yay! i sure hope that Alice is pregnant! that would be so awesome :) and Bella should be greatfull for what Edward and Emmett did, but knowing her im sure she will be somwhat upset that they endangered themselves for her, selfless as always. thank you so much for writing this! it really gets my mind of reality, which has been hard lately... thanks again :)
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
This was good. Yeah like in real life James can come back and really do some major damage to Bella or Edward. He could bring a knife or gun next time and kidnap her or hurt him. This is getting good. Bring it.
~Shani
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
It took you long enough. Thank goodness it was a long chapter! I like the James suspense. I think Bella will be a little pissed because Edward planned all this without her knowledge or consent.
Reviewer: mrsmitchell (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Excellent!! keep going!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I was gonna ask if James has had a psychotic break.....
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Great chapter! Loved that Ed and Em took charge of events. ;) Bella is going to be one hot cookie when she figures out they set the whole thing up.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Glad he's in custody. :-)
Reviewer: Siyd (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Short but sweet. Great thinking on Edward and Emmett's part.
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
she will be pissed he lied and put himself in danger, but relieved that he is in jail. Alice isn't pregnant...too easy
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
LoL...oh my god a tattoo really...that is awesome. I've finally decided to cave and am considering getting one on my back for my next birthday. Seeing I have an issue with needles this will definalty be a stretch for me. Wish me luck...
Oh I love a no nonsense Bella, James better watch himself...
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I an not sure about Alice, but I am pretty sure Bella is going to be pissed about the James thing! She will not agree with Edward regarding the semantics of her wish for him to not do something stupid. Maybe James will act crazy and they will lock him up for that too!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
Wow Bruce is offering Bella a fantastic deal but what crummy timing. Sigh...yes I've been wondering what Jasper is hiding. LoL...what a heck of a homecoming...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
This is so fabulous...I am just itching to read more...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
Why that no good for nothing scumbag James!! I can't believe the snake didn't have the decency to tell Bruce Bella was called away on an emergency...Grrrr
I am thrilled that Edward and Jasper made it...at least that is well in the well.
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