Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Fantastic as always!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Great chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
I'm confused. I thought Bella said before that Monday and Tuesday were her days off because the restaurant was closed but then it isn't.
That was sad but I'm glad Edward just didn't give in! Another great chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Fantastic again!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Great chapter, as always!
Reviewer: thelittlemermaid (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
OH EM GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. This story has been the best saturday morning present to myself ever.
Reviewer: irishash (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
i love that alice could be pregnant, be so cute. Well done to edward and em. amazing story so far, hope you update soon xox
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
Plus I couldn’t remember any more words. - Perfect line!
Brilliant chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
“Hey Edward, wanna come to Seattle with me on Friday?” he deadpanned, as I stared at the photo. - That was genius.
“Call me the queen of mixed signals,” she acknowledged apologetically. - LOVED that line.
Another amazing chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
Fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
The world is full of men who think they can stay young by refusing to grow up. Look for the ones who are proud to be grown men. - That is some amazing advice!
That chapter was absolutely perfect!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Another brilliant chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Another fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: newborntwifan (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
GAH! Are you freakin' kidding me!!!!???
OK, ok....i like how you've tied Bella's job & James & Edawrd up into one neat little knot for her to undo.
Reviewer: phoenixfan1 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I read this whole story today and I love it! Are you going to continue???? I hope so!!!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Fantastic!
Reviewer: newborntwifan (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
Sure do like that Edward just says what he means. More men should be like that for cripe's sake! ;)
And I love the '...drunken monkey on roller skates' line!
Reviewer: newborntwifan (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Great story! A Southern Edward is very different but I like him. ;) I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Love the EPOV! Clicking next!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Wow! Amazing first chapter! I'm clicking next. :)
Reviewer: EverlastingMuse (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
very good! I like it!!
Reviewer: livy4evr (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
ITS BEEN SO LONG YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
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