Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
This kind of reminds of a summer fling, which hey they are great especially when you are young and single!!! (just wish it wasnt such a short amount of time)
But of course their fling is gonna turn into more.....right? Right.
Reviewer: lpham12 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Ok. Bella is srsly pissing me off. Could she play these games any harder?
Reviewer: superflow (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Super great EPOV! Creepy perv LOL! Great first 2 opening chapters. Can't wait to read onwards and get further into the story.
Reviewer: samiam77 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
THis story has been awsome and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Gah! Where the hell was my head? I needed to get off this godforsaken, hormone-spiking, sex god-producing island.<------I am also on that island!!
LMAO Edward heard her make that comment to Rose and Alice....oh how emabarrassing, but what an ego boost for Edward, as if he needs that!!
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Well I must say that I liked Edwards 2nd cure for the sunburn! Yep I am heading out tomorrow to get one so I can tell my bf that I have read about an excellent cure ;)
I can't wait for them to finally get a full lemon, to find out about what happend between her and Sam, and for Bella to meet his parents!! And of course Emmett is gonna be Emmett and be a hard ass on Edward.
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Oh oh oh I have a sun burn!!! Can Edward help me??? LOL
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
I just love it when Eddie boy gets a little jealous!!! And I love it when he acts on his jealousy!!
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
I think their plan was pretty smart to trap James. I wonder if Alice really is pregnant.
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
So where is this room where a hot roomate named Edward comes home unexpectedily and wants to have hot sex with me in the middle of the night??? Seriously I will program the address in my garmin and be on my way ;)
Oh the sexually frustration already....can't wait to see how their relationship develops!!
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
Emmett's proposal was great - I liked that he paid attention to what she really liked. I hope this is the last of James, but I am guess not. I keep wondering how this group is going to get back together.
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
What was obviously an erection of impressive proportions<ahem, Oh sweet mother of smutness :)
And yes that was mean....I mean really, I need to go take a bath now and read a book....LOL but I am sure you will make it up to us ;)
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way
What a wild and crazy fight! I am glad that Jasper set him a little straight. I liked seeing Bella's thoughts of Edward's work event. So many things i want to see what will happen - Emmett and Rose being foremost.
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
It is funny that Rose kicked Emmett out. Everyone seems to be on meltdown mode.
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
I loved how Edward decided to get Bella's forgiveness by washing dishes. I am curious what James will decide to do.
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You
I liked this outtake. It does crack me up when they call eachother Son.
Reviewer: livy4evr (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
YOU REALLY SUCK! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER ALREADY! COME ON THE SOTRY IS TO GOOD TO BE LEFT1 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE OR I WONT LIKE YOU ANYMORE!
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
I'm kind of with Bella waiting for something bad to happen. I do like them together. I loved Edward's psychological warfare with Emmett and the tattoo.
Reviewer: jules 40 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Your not evil your marvelous!!!! Love it.
Reviewer: samiam77 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Wow, and I'm glad Edward isn't being a door mat.
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I was expecting something more drawn out with James and not an offer to relocate! Hmm, how is that going to work? I love that Bella can feel secure about her job and stick it to James.
Reviewer: samiam77 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Edward is hot! lol
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 20 Respite (V)
Edward it too beyond perfect with what he says. His protective ways in wanting to talk to Bruce makes me smile. I really wonder what James will say to her when she returns.
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I gotta love Esme. What a great mom! Yeah, I thought James was going to screw over Bella in some way.
Reviewer: HoosierNina (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Oh no Jasper! I was caught in a riptide once in South Carolina. That is some scary stuff. I love how accepting Carlisle and Esme are.
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