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Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I am so glad that you are here, I actually am boycotting FF for the reason they are getting rid of stories like yours.
I am sure they will realise soon enough, but anyway.
wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next installment.
Till then thank you.
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I am so glad that you are here, I actually am boycotting FF for the reason they are getting rid of stories like yours.
I am sure they will realise soon enough, but anyway.
wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next installment.
Till then thank you.
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I am so glad that you are here, I actually am boycotting FF for the reason they are getting rid of stories like yours.
I am sure they will realise soon enough, but anyway.
wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next installment.
Till then thank you.
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I am so glad that you are here, I actually am boycotting FF for the reason they are getting rid of stories like yours.
I am sure they will realise soon enough, but anyway.
wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next installment.
Till then thank you.
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I am so glad that you are here, I actually am boycotting FF for the reason they are getting rid of stories like yours.
I am sure they will realise soon enough, but anyway.
wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next installment.
Till then thank you.
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I am so glad that you are here, I actually am boycotting FF for the reason they are getting rid of stories like yours.
I am sure they will realise soon enough, but anyway.
wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next installment.
Till then thank you.
Reviewer: Nitefall-lake (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Great story! Characters are great - love the southern accents and Edward opinion about his most important job. Feel good about your story and what you're writing.
Reviewer: sochain is solas (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
first off, you don't suck, darlin. and bollox to anyone who says you do. it should go without saying that real life concerns take precedence over fanfiction. that's just the way it is and you don't need to apologize for it. so, chin up- and know that your efforts are appreciated.
that said, great chapter! i can't believe the story is almost over. i'm looking forward to seeing where everyone ends up!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I don't want to think about this story ending! I love the way you write, how you paint a picture in my head of the characters. awesome beyond means!
You don't suck at all! Hey RL happens and I am just pleased that you take the time to write so I will gladly take the chapter updates as they come. No need to apoligize!
Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
fabulous... this is one story I won't want to end. You really are an excellent writer. Have enjoyed your portrayal of the characters and also the way you weave the plot together. Thank you.
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
can you make it ten more chapters till the story ends? I love this story and do not want to see it end.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Well I am glad James has been arrested and now they no he is crazy and the threat is real! So often people think once someone with issues like these is arrested its over, but as a nurse I know that this can sometimes trigger alot more volence! <3
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Writing is hard. If it weren't everyone would do it. With RL pressures along with wrangling with your muse? Well, honey, you just do the best you can. I don't like waiting because I love the story, but I have a RL too, so I CAN wait and do other things in the mean time. If someone fusses at you for being slow to update just tell them to write their own friggin' story and leave you alone. Tell them I said so...
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
For the record, you do not suck. This was a great chapter.
Personally, I hope you find a way to get Everybody to The South :)
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Oh, I hate to hear that the story is winding down. I love this story. I am glad about the direction this is going. I hope they all up and move to Hilton Head. Including Rose and Emmett. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Great update as per usual, glad you were able to make it back to the story. Hope things improve for you stress wise in your RL...try not to worry about the stories stuff happens life gets in the way, we'll all be here when you return. <3
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
yeye. uodate very soon.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I don't know how I got so behind, this is your third update (and I thought I had missed one) I love you Edward so much, love all of his southern charm! I can't believe James would stoop so low th drug anyone of them but then again this is James so I have learned to expect the unexpected! I just don't want him to do something really crazy to Bella, Edward or their friends!
Great chapter! Now I get to continue.............
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Psh. You don't suck for not updating - you're awesome for writing such a great story in the first place. Focus on RL (as it is, after all, *real*), and we'll be happily waiting for you when you get around to updating.
That being said... I love the way you do these characters. They're such fun to read, and I *am* looking forward to the next update. When you have time. :)
Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
People making your cry? Asshats. They don't know the first rule of reviewing and reading. You don't do that to the people who write them fabulous stories to read. Shame on them! Anyway...
I was so excited to get an update e-mail. This story is always so good to read. Alice is preggo, Edward wants to talk to Bella about marriage. So much is happening. I wonder what Edward was doing while Bella is away. Can't wait to find out!
I'm sad to see this story is winding down, but I know that there will be good things happening between now and then. Thanks for sharing this with us and I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
That is awful people bitch about the updates! Sorry you have to deal w/ that crap. Good Lord - people have lives! I enjoy your writing.
Reviewer: MyHubbyIsATwilightWidow (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
This is a great story. It seems Bella may want to move to be with Edward's family - just need to take Emmett and Rosalie with them. Your smooth talking southern gentlemen are great. Love Jasper. Can't wait to see how you finish this up. Thank you for not abandoning the story - even when RL gets in the way.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I love getting your updates whenever you are ready to post. I kept hoping that there were 2 positives among the pregnancy tests. Love the conversation at the end with Edward. Perfect!
Reviewer: wildcatlizzie (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
D'awww!! Alice and Jasper are going to be wonderful parents. :) Although, I'm glad that we were able to cross that bridge this chapter because I was dying to know Alice's reaction!
People telling you that you suck for not reviewing suck! So there. ;)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Happy news all around for everyone. Alice finally took the pregnancy test which stated positive. Of course everyone else already knew by her mood swings, sleeping habits, and constantly eating. Jasper is excited about the baby as well as his whole family too. Rose and Bella are missing their men back in Seattle. Bella is realizing that Kate and Alice's children will be close cousins, but hers and Rose's children will be across the country. Only short visits with other cousins. Edward and Bella finally talked about marriage. Edward always wanted to marry Bella, but didn't ask because he thought would send her packing. Now Bella wants to get married so when Bella returns in another 4 days they'll have a lot to talk about. Hurray. Disappointed that only have a few chapters left of this story. How romantic to take his call on the beach that meant so much to them both. Edward being so far from home and family, but he made a choice to be close to the woman he loved. Looking forward to Bella combining North and South in her cooking.
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