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Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

I read this story a while back before it had really progressed.  I think it was was up to the chp where Bella was going to go out with jacob.  I forgot to put it on my list for updates and forgot about it until I did a search and found it again.  I am soooooo glad that I did.  Now I am caught up and have to wait, but I am not going to pressure you one bit.  I am enjoying the story and hate that it is almost over.  So take a while to write a really long chapter or 5 or 10.  Love that Edward has that southern draw too.  Being from the south myself I do have to say that it is impossible to not love a southern gentleman.  (especially ones that are as cute as ed and jaz, right?)  Great story, my deary,

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: EffinEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Hahah: "Tell him goodnight til his hand goes numb!" - awesome!!  I love this story!  Can't wait for more chapters!!

Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

I loved the chapter, but 16 weeks? There is absolutely no way that Alice can be 4 months pregnant and not realize it. You should look that over and you have a few misspelled words. Your beta should read more carefully. Other than that, AWESOME STORY! ;)

Reviewer: VMFanFicFanatic (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

You do NOt suck :-)

Reviewer: whitt96 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

ssssssssssssoooooooooooo good, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovin_twilight (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

I think it's hilarious that Alice didn't know she was pregnant (or didn't at least see it coming) since she's the one who has visions :)

Are we going to have time for an Edward and Bella wedding with only 3 chaps left?

Reviewer: wuogkat (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

"Real Life Before FanFic"

Anyone who says otherwise has no life.

Take care of yourself first.

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

you are great fir updating!!!

today is march 8th- women's intenational day- you must never feel the need to apologise to anyone for doing your job at your pace- it's your creativity after all and we readers are just lucky you like to share!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NEVER CRY ON THAT ACCOUNT or otherwisw i'll call you silly :) - and i don't believe you are!

love your fics! pls continue whenever you feel like it!!!

yours

elina

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Yes they do have alot to talk over.  Edward still have to explain the James situation to Bella and she need to confide in him about her buisness plans.  Both need to get it togther.  You know I thought you were going to have Bella be pregnant instead of Alice.  That would have been a shock.  Either way.  the story is turning out nice.

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

*sigh* I like this story!
and you suck... (jk. I wouldn't have even gone there except you specifically said not to go there.) LOL!
Take your time... once you got James out of the way in the last chapter, at least we're not hanging on a cliffie!

Reviewer: grabbarna (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

thanks for the update... it was a nice chapter

Reviewer: crush-on-lush (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

aww that was a sweet chapter!

Reviewer: marenshir (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

You don't suck.  Sometimes real life does tho.  Great story.  Keep up the good work as you are able :-D

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Awwww!  Yay for Alice being pregnant!

Thanks for finding time to update!  Don't let them (anyone) make you feel bad when RL gets in the way... at least you have one!  :)

Reviewer: tkeaton1 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

followed you here from ff.... they are ridiculous over there for dropping these amazing stories. So glad you continued here! I will miss this story!

Reviewer: twmomma (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

OMG!  I can't believe people actually get mad and review about that!   Crazy!   I loved the chapter and I can not wait to see how it all unfolds and they all get to go back home for good:)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Don't let the reviews that crap at you make you upset.  It's nice that they like your stuff that much but RL can definitely be a bitch.  I liked the chapter... yay Alice is prego!  I hope Edward finally tells Bella... and she takes it okay.

Reviewer: Mile (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

I will wait for your updates, I know you won't leave us without an end. Take your time, thank you for sharing your story with us. /Mile, from Chile.

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

what is edward hiding from bella while she is in hilton head?  Did I miss something or will it come later?  Thanks

Reviewer: NinaZuccari (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

The chapter's lovely! Thank you soo much for updating and making my day. (: You're an amazing writer and you do NOT suck. Update whenever you can!

Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Glad to see this one again. I hope RL leaves you alone so you can update more often. Its such a great story..and I'm wondering how things will turn out when Edward tells Bella about James. Not to mention whether they are going to turn around and move to Hilton Head after they just got a house together.

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

I was laughing so hard that Eric thought I'd lost my mind.....Rosalie snorted, hauling herself up off the couch, too. “I’m going to go call Emmett and tell him goodnight til his hand goes numb!” “Very nice!” I called after her retreating form. “I’m using that in your wedding toast!” and I say we move forward with Operation Clear Blue Easy.” Loved it! and your updating skills are sweet, sugar!

 

 

 

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Awesome chapter!  I hope this is leading Edward, Bella and hopefully Emmett and Rose home!  (to Hilton head that is)!!!  Yeah Alice and Jasper!

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Keep it coming!  I love this story and even though RL is trying I am glad you're going to finish.  Even if it takes awhile! :) 

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Good chapter!

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