Reviewer: WitchBgood (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Yay to more chapters and to everything that it brings! I love this little baby so much so when I see it pop up I get super excited! I'm glad that Bella found out and that Edward owned up to it, although I am annoyed about the whole James thing! It'll be interesting to see how you work this out! Until next review...
Reviewer: jerogers06 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
OMG... that was amazing! I need the next chapter ASAP!
Reviewer: jerogers06 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
OMG.... I need the next chapter ASAP! That was amazing!
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Thanks for the update. I really love this wonderful story.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
take all the chapters you need
Reviewer: Mona Lisa (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Favorite line: "Don't be sorry, just be naked" - lol that cracked me up. I'm nervous about James! I hope he gets locked away soon... great chapter, can't wait to read the rest!!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Thanks so much for the update! The email from Jake was great...I thought he was just going to get on a plane w/o even calling! But then we would have missed the epic phone fight. I hope we can get all of this James stuff settled! I get anxious about stories ending withh loose ends around! 3 or 4 chapters would be just fine, lovely! :)
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
It looks like they may be heading south!
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I hope talk is about them moving to Hilton Head.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Nice chapter. I think Bella overreacted ... a lot. Be mad for him not telling you but the silent treatment? Not good, and not very mature. I get the partnership and working together aspect, but Bella seems to make it seem as though she doesn't want Edward to even try and take care of her. Welcome to a relationship girl. That's not going to change. Doesn't mean you have to lose yourself.
And what was that Jake crap? If the shoe had been on the other foot, Bella would be pissed too. I hope she went to Jake and slapped him. He deserved it. It was creepy and uncalled for.
Reviewer: deltagirl (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I love when J/E call each other "son" ha ha.
Reviewer: mimi53 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Best things about living in the south......the food, , warm winters, slow talkin' friendly people who tell terrific stories. I laughed out loud when Edward said the people up north talk too fast...totally agree with that one!
Reviewer: Twilight is Awesome (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
hey this is a great story. i really enjoyed reading all of it. hehe, i read all of it in one weekend. i really loved how you put them together not perfectly, because everybody has their own problems. but edward is still sexy so i'm not complaining. thank you for writing this story, and hope you update soon
-T
(ignore the uncreative pen name, couldn't think of anything artsy, and i think edwardcullenpwnsmyobsessiveass was already taken...)
Reviewer: Swino (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Loving this story. Looking forward to the next update and hoping that wont be too long....
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
OK, seriously....they only have unsweetened tea? I knew there was something def wrong with those peeps, hahahahaha. I love your pronounciations. I am from TN and I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Jasper and Southern Edward!
Kick his ass Edward!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
too bad she wasn't within arm's reach of that rusty cleaver...
the story is soooo great so far, great job
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
I love EPOV...good job.
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
damn, girl, where's this house? loved it!
Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Sunburns are a bitch
Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Funny. Awkward. Loved it.
~Jessi
Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
I always like Edward's POV you made him sound very real. I liked how you had him tell the story past tense. It was good. Like it.
~Jessi Cullen
Reviewer: giarcak (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I've read the whole thing in the last day and a half and I LOVE this story!!! Can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: ecjonas (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
loving this but plzzzz
Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Wow. I;m glad I finally got around to reading this!
~Jessi Cullen
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Awesome! I LOVE Alice being pregnant! YAY for babies!!!
You don't suck.
Just thought I'd throw that in there...
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