Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I hope this all leads to them all moving to Hilton Head. I think they will be so much happier there, once they get James out of the picture.
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Totally get Bellas priorities ;) anger comes second! Yet another cliffie...they're gonna talk about moving south, right? E's not too happy with his job and B wants to start a restaurant in the south...that's all good...but what about Em and Rose? *pouts* Are they gonna be left all alone on the east coast? And...James is bound to return soon...:( *grumbles*
No worries hun, take your time with the writing...it's better not to rush things! <3
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
You ended it there?! Please update soon so we can find out what's happened in this mess!
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I'm not sad about having a few more chapters of this! :-)
Great update and a very hot finish! LOL!
James is a sick individual, isn't he? I'm curious to know how you're going to resolve that.
Edward doesn't really like his job and Bella loves Hilton Head and being near Alice - do I spy another move on the horizon?
Can't wait for the next update. Good luck with your writing!x
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
You keep going on forever for all I care -- I love this story
Reviewer: Ilse (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Great chapter, glad you continue the story over here at twilighted! Hope you update a chapter soon again.
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Well that turned out way better for Edward than I anticipated. I have a feeling I know what direction you are headed but I like it. Look forward to the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too long.
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Your writing a great story. Hating to let it go cause it's been around so long. Don't ever worry bout updates, life is like that. You've got the hard part I get the easy part. I read 'em. But I will oh so miss him say sugar. My heart melts, and I hope we find out about Alice and Jaz's baby and what happens to James. The move there gonna make when Bella takes the new job (hint, hint) and how Em and Rose have to follow So yeah I'm thinking 4 chapters and a epi maybe more....LOL. 'till next time.
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Yes the signs are all pointing due South - and that is just fine by me!
Oooo, I didn't expect James to get out on bail, I just know that he has one last moment left where Bella will be threatened. And I am really looking forward to seeing how you plot it out.
Rose is a classic - she knows Emmett makes dumb decisions so she just accepts it and loves him all the more for it. I'm sure Bella and Edward weren't the only ones going at it when they got home from the airport;)
I am only too happy that you need more chapters to finish off this fic - I am far too selfish and want it to continue! Thanks for the update xx
Reviewer: tsmacker (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Write as many chapters as you need. I'll read whatever you write. Somehow I see them ending up back in Hilton Head. That seems logical. Perhaps Emmet and Rose will relocate as well.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: Julia Dawn (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Loved the smut in the end... it was the cherry of the chapter ;)
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I had a feeling that Bella was going to find out and be pissed. But who could stay mad when you have a god like man calling you sugar, OME.
Reviewer: tsmacker (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Take however long you need. I have always loved this story and am glad that you are not giving up on it.
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Are they moving back? Yea! Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: Intricacy (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Nice chapter :) But now, you cannot leave Emmett and Rosalie behind in the North, can you??
Hope next update comes sooooon!
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
With the last line you can actually take it two ways and I am sure that is how you planned it.
I just hope when you say there are only 4 chapters to go they are going to be long ass chapters. because if I know you from reading your stories, you will pack a lot into them.
I cant wait to see what Bella is talking about, my feeling of what Bella is talking about is either splitting with Edward or moving down to Hilton Head, but then again you are writing the story and I will only find out when you update. I am no mind reader.
Thank you for the update love the chapter.
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Great chapter! I hope James leaves them alone that crazy SOB.
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Great ending and good news about the next chapters. I really don't want this story to end.
Reviewer: T Kitty (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Yay thanks for the update!!! Cant wait for more!!
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
no complaints from me if there are extra chapters
Reviewer: FittenFotten (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
pointing where?...they're moving to Hilton Head?!
Reviewer: seanin (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
great chapter! i think their going to move to hilton head to be nearer alice etc.
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Great chapter!! Bella really should not be mad at Edward! I think he was very brave! LOL If you need 3-4 more chapters fine with me. Heck 5,6,7,8, or more and I'm good!! LOL Update soon. ;o}
Reviewer: Twilight is Awesome (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
this is great. are they going to move to hilton head? because eddie's is starting to not like his job, and bella's restaurant is "somewhere in the south". and what's gonna happen to James? i hope he is gone and over with soon.
update soon please!!
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