Reviewer: RingTheBella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
that was a nice "welcome home" wasn't it ;)
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I love that Bella keeps him in check in this story. So good. This update made me happy. I always love to see the e-mail pop in my inbox that this story updated. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And 3 or 4 more chapters is AWESOME. Don't apologize for that. I love this story and I'm going to be sad when it ends.
Reviewer: melissa109 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Love the story and great writing. Can't wait to see how it ends
Reviewer: Hecate-Luna (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
i love this story and want them to MOVE to HH and FAST! thanks for writing!
Reviewer: MrsJim (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I knew it!
Reviewer: MrsJim (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Why do I have the sinking feeling that James is going to screw Bella over, and her job will be gone or in danger when she gets back
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I love how fisty these two are, great work.
Reviewer: jersey623 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
def made my day finding out that this story was updated! it's def one of my favs! i wish bella had given edward a little more shit for the whole james plan. patiently waiting for the next chapter :-)
Reviewer: sharpshiver (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Oh my GOD!!.. it was just so perfect!.. I started reading this a few days back, and guess what?.. I'm hooked like ANYTHING!!!.. You are ...Arghh.. i swear i really am out of words to tell how ABSOLUTELY AMAZING writer you are, Its probably the best fanfic I'v read so far!..
And the way you'v portrayed edward as a human, and bella edward's love, it just so perfect, couldn't be better beleive me.
I'm glad that you are planning to extend it with couple of more chapters,
I WANT MORE of BELLA AND EDWARD!.. so Dont end it soon please.
And yeah the 'Lemons' haha, i love this word!.. are "out of this world!!!' (underline..underline.. exclamatory mark exclamatory mark!!)like you said in something stupid. ;)
So write more and SOON please, you're killing me here!
for the record, you're the best!
i wish i could rate it more than 10.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
dun ,dun duuunnnnn
Heres hoping Edward resigns and they return to Hilton Head for their HEA !
How could we not be pleased it may take extra chapters ?
You are forgiven !
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I really thought Bella was going to lay into Edward but in a much different way! LOL Your way was much better. I can't imagine what James will do now, especially knowing he's on Coke. That is scary stuff!! Is he going to hurt Edward for having him arrested? Hurt Bella because she was top chef? So many scary options here!! Fantastic writing in this tale!! So sexy and suspenseful! Keep it going! *hugs*
Joan
Reviewer: Belle4567 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
I love this story and am so glad you updated!
This needs to win an award!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Ha! Horny beats mad. It so does!
Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Hooray! 3 or 4 more chapters is good for me! I love your sweet story! This Edward it too yummy for words - gah!! Sugar Sugar Sugar!
We just need to wrap up this scary James issue and how are we going to get Rose and Em to Hilton Head? Can't wait!
Reviewer: ReedsMom (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Like I'm going to complain about more chapters? Pshaw!
What are we going to do about James? Some how, some way, we need to get him out of the picture entirely. And E & B need to have a little heart to heart.
Thanks, bb!
Reviewer: Edwardsfavoritebrunette (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Uh oh!
Your James sounds a lot like James in The Lost Boys... Less psycho, but nonetheless creepy!
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Forgive? What's to forgive? More chapters? Okay! Yes please!
Reviewer: tcv (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
wow hot and surprising lemon, mmmhmhm. thanks for the chapter,nice to see how they go trough with love when they are mad. what does she means at the end???? please keep james away
Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Move!! They need to mo-ove, they need to mo-ove, away from the psychopath, away from the crazy boss, to the new restaurant and back to their family. They need to drag Emmett and Rose too!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Take as many chapters as you like...I can't get enough of Edward saying "sugar". And that welcome home was fabulous!
Of course I keep thinking that James is lurking around the corner...with his bizarre psycho thoughts.
Thank you for writing this story!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
I agree with you everyone has to have atleast one crazy fast fling in their lifetime! This is just what Bella needed to help get over Sam!
Reviewer: atxcullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
Yeah, I kind of knew when Edward moved to Seattle so fast, that he would end up not liking the job and when Alice announced she was moving, that would seal the deal that Edward and Bella would end up back in SC. I just hope he is able to get an offer from that one firm he liked and let go rather than go back to Carlisle's firm. Great chapter! What will happen with James though? Them moving will definitely end it, but is James going to go after Edward now that he saw he was set up? Or will Bella have to be saved from James in the nick of time?
Reviewer: dinkadot (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play
AHHHHH is she gonna finally want to move so she can open the other resturant out at Hilton head.. Edward isnt happy where he is at and he can go back with his dad.... SHeesh... I cant wait for the next update.
Brandi :)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Wow Sam is a scumbag! Bella and Edward are so good together! I'm very much enjoying the dynamic of this story!
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