Didnt think i would be interested in this, but i loved it.

Also- for some reason the 2nd part/ half of this chapter was a total whiteout? i had to highlight it with the cursor to see the writing. x

Poor Jasper has had quite a time.  Great chapter!

xoxo Sarah

loved it! thanks for sharing:)

I liked that! I love to hear from Jazz! It was great that everyone was so willing for Jazz to be a part of the family right away.

I hate those parents, though! Even though J is beetter off with the Cullens, his folks should have had the decency to make sure Jazz was settled! Good grief!

You know you have written well when you get a reaction like that, huh?

NOTE: After One Year Later, my screen showed a series of white blocks were the text should have been. When I scrolled over the white areas with my cursor, blue text showed up and I was able to read the rest of the chapter. I wanted to mention it in case you can do anything to make the text consistent, and maybe you won't get too many messages about it.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

Hi, Great story continues, ...but I've got a problem with the second half of the text, just white lines!

Can you re-post? ta, Millburn

You can highlight the "one year later" and read the text.  It's all there there, the font and background is just white.

 

poor Jasper! i just wanna hold that little boy! and I love Carlisle- he's always been one of my favorites. 

 

I was able to read up until the part that says "A Year Later."  Then it was all white blocks and no words.  I liked what i read so far!

Long distance relationships do suck.  Hurry up and get them together.  Can't wait for all the fun coming. 

Too fast, no way.  it is what it is meant to be.  True love comes when you are ready and this is what your character, Bella is ready for at this time.  The rest will come, HOPEFULLY, as she continues to heal.  Keep writing as I keep reading.

Thanks,

Well, I just want you to know that I am sooooooo enjoying this story!  I love it!  The sex is great, would love even more detail, but still it is wonderful!  I don't know if everyone else feels the same, but I just wanted you to know that I personally love the way you include BOTH in your story, the love story part of it is absolutely beautiful, you've made my heart skip several beats from fear, and anticipation, worry, everything....and just their love story is so wonderful, I want to cry from happiness.  Talk about living vicariously through someone else!!  Anyway, keep up the AWESOME work, and I will be waiting patiently (I will try atleast) for your next update/chapter. 

Thanks for putting a smile on my face, Iris

WowFWiw sounds like Bella wants to move close to Alice and Jasper. I can't wait to see what happens next! Can't wait to see James away for good!

that was  freakin hot!!!!