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Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
that was great to understand jazz a bit better!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
The white blocks are still there, although I could read one paragraph under the heading of "One Year Later".
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
i liked it! it shows what a young boy was trying to make out of all of this. im sure it was hard and i think that hes better off with the cullens too!
Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
loved it but it was so sad because parents are doing that alot right now thanks for sharing....
Reviewer: KristenDH (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I feel so bad for jasper and how horrible his parents were to him. I cannot imagine how his parent could have done that to there only son, its heartbreaking. Thanks for this outake!
Reviewer: DrSnuggles (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
ok is it supposd to end after the gentleman's code?? all i can se after that is loads of white blocks/stripes!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I will admit that at first I was a little disappointed that this wasn't a regular chapter, but after reading the first sentence I was sucked into the outtake and did not give it another thought! I think you did a fantastic job writing the conversations between Jasper and Carlisle, and Jasper and Edward... You made the feelings clear that Jasper was already considered a son and a brother to the Cullens and you did it so beautifully! Thank you for putting this chapter into words for all of us and I hope your writer's block works itself out soon! Cannot wait to see what happens next in the story!
Reviewer: OJH (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
What a sweet outake. I think many of us would have loved to get adopted by a great family, if not for "real", at least spending time with them.
Hope you get unblocked. I love your story and can't wait for the next update. You can do it.
Reviewer: LibraryLady08 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I thought it was good. Lots of insight into Jasper and what he felt like then.
-MJ
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Great first half... but the point from "A Year Later" only shows white blank lines...
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
What miserable excuses for parents! My grandfather ran out on my grandmother leaving her to raise 6 kids on her own without so much as a goodbye. He just left one day & never came back. Makes you wonder why some people bother having children at all
PS hope the writer's block goes away soon, I'm anxious for more!
Reviewer: momo15 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
hey great so far except it just large white boxes or an error after it says one year later....... :(
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Yeah, it was a powerful image from the very beginning and it was fun to actually read it...
hope the writersblock will ease up eventually for you...they can be a beyotch ;) thanks...I still have hope ;) <3
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
What a nice outtake for Jasper! Me likey!
Reviewer: easilydistracted (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Awesome, Paige!
*sniff*
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
hi, i enjoyed your outtake but was kinda of puzzled as to why you wrote the next section in white ink?
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Thanks for the extra. Enjoyed it. Sad and happy. :)
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
cool insight to Jasper
Reviewer: slwortham (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I loved it! I got a little misty-eyed...maybe not such a good thing seeing as I'm at work ;)
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
There was nothing (no story) after A Year Later. Just blank boxes. Is this the way it was supposed to be?
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Dood! You have an epic formatting fail after the one year later mark...
I wantz to read...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Oh my goodness! I could help crying to think of Jasper, still a young boy, thrown out of the car like an empty hamburger wrapper. What a painful scene. Still, Carlisle's words were perfect when he said Jasper was better off with him and Esme. Making a baby does not make you a parent, but loving a child certainly does.
Reviewer: trinity70x0 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I am having trouble with the part beginning at "One Year Later". I dont think it uploaded properly.
Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Awwwww poor Jasper. Brave little soldier! I just want to give him a big hug. And Carlile, for being so awesome.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I loved what I read. I had trouble viewing the year later part on. Oh well I'll try later. Thanks for still posting. I love this story. If there is anyway for me to help, let me know. I'm sure lots of people would love to. :) Nancy
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