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Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Yep, that's Southern gentlemen for you!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I think Jasper was already the better man when his parent dumped him by the road. It's typical Esme and Carlisle to include Jasper without further ado into their family.

Hope you can overcome your writer's block soon.

Reviewer: LissLove (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

this is so sweet! I feel so sorry voor Jasper, but I'm glad he has found a better family :)

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Poor Jasper....I absolutely love Carlisle and how he never even thought twice about taking Jasper in and making him part of the family.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

That was heart breaking. It's too bad people don't think what they do to children when thye do stupid stuff like that. any way as always you put out another great chapter and can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Wow, that was awesome.  When I read what this outtake was about I was admittedly apprehensive about reading it.  I thought it would just be depressing.  But you did an awesome job with it.  It turned out to be about blessings and family and love rather than dissertion and loss.  Jasper's parents are a prime example that just because people have children does not necessarily mean they deserve them.  They did not deserve Jasper, and Jasper and the Cullens deserved each other.  And this Carlisle, one of the best Carlisles that I have ever read.  Really great outtake!  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Thank you for this beautiful outtake. Outtakes are one of my favorite things about fan fiction. They give us a deeper glimpse to characters and situations without disrupting the main story.

Reviewer: lovin_twilight (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Quite an eye opener....I cannot imagine a parent doing that to their child.  Between Alice and Jasper, their parents are awful!

Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

So heartbreaking! :( Take all the time you need to continue the story. you're doing an excellent job!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Carlisle and Esme are incredibly wonderful, loving parents and they raised and equally wonderful son in Edward.  How many boys would be jealous of sharing their parents.  I hurt for Jasper but he really is better off that they left him. 

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

This was so sad!! Jasper's parents were more interested in the money and evasion than taking care of a sweet boy, their own son? Unbelievable! And Carlisle and Esme love their kids so it was really a joy to read how they took Jasper in and made him their own and he welcomed it. I just loved this chapter!
Joan

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I heart Jasper - I just want to grab him and hug him hard.

I heart Carlisle - He sayes the most perfect things.

Beautiful chapter xx

Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I found it terribly sad, yet heartening all at once. Jasper was for the better that his parents left.

Reviewer: Asanderd (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Loved that! Jasper's parents are dickish cowards. Even though the way they abandoned him was really shitty, I'm glad they did, because Jasper is way better off with out the paternal people!

Reviewer: MyHubbyIsATwilightWidow (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Love this outtake.  But I hope your writer's block goes away soon so you can get back to the main story.  The quote about a gentleman is perfect for Jasper's character.  And your version of Carlisle must be just about the best dad ever.

Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Poor Jasper, being left on the side of the road like that.  I can't believe his parents put all that on his shoulders.  That's awful.  Most parents would find any way possible to stay with their child and they just discarded him like trash.  I guess in the end though, they did the right thing for Jasper.  Who knows what would have happened to him if he stayed with his parents.  They just went about it the completely wrong way. 

Thanks for sharing.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  But, it will come to you when it comes.  We'll all be here when it does.  Thanks as always Paige!

Reviewer: Carlisles angels (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Wow. Thankyou. That was eye opening. Sometimes, as in real life too, you can read about something and you feel sorry for the situation, but like this chapter, you painted a picture of Jaspers gratitude and struggle to be the bigger man.

Reviewer: JRAtkinson88 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Sad! What dickish parents! But Im glad Jazz ended up in the right spot.

Reviewer: Angelique (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Loved it, thanks!!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I thought this chapter was lovely! I especially liked the quote in the middle. It explains a lot about what kind of man Jasper aspires to be.

Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I very much enjoyed this little bit of background on Jasper. His parents were all kinds of sucky. I liked this and can't wait for another chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: LoriAnnTwiFan (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

That was really fantastic! It caught the balance between the embarrasment Jasper felt at being discarded, the immediate (and careful) acceptance put forth by the Cullens, and the awkward transition from temporary to permanent settling that took place over the first year and beyond. As much as I am looking forward to having Edward leave his job and Bella get her own restaurant (my own personal prediction), this was a great scene to tide us over until the next chapter comes pouring over that writer's block dam! We've missed you! :o)

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I love it when people write stories that deal with the same personalities and traits that the characters had in the original.  For example, Edward--his overwelming need to protect;  Emmett--a stronghouse, but a teddy bear with a fierce heart; Jasper--his southern hospitality and draw to everyone he meets; & Carlisle and Esme--possess deep love and affection for every child whether they are initially their own & will do anything in their power to protect and keep them safe.  It is so refreshing to still get those in stories and not too out of character so you wrote them well!!!  Hope your writers block is clearing out and cant wait to read your next chapter! 

Hugs, stephanie

Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I really liked the insight.

Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Just love this chapter.  Poor Jasper... he was lucky the Cullen were there :)

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